| "Until Death" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 20:05 CST
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What a very touching story. This is very detailed and exciting to read. I wish that Inuyasha would have pulled his head out of his backside when he chose to help Kikyo kill Kagome. What kind of person, like Sesshomaru pointed out, agree to kill some one that they supposedly loved? I'm glad that Kikyo died by his claws, serves the clay pot witch right. As for the voice at the end of the last chapter, I see that as his mother, or possibly a sister. The person who helped Yura after she lost her family. I'd like to see him get Kagome back and the adventure that he has to do it. Maybe Inuyasha coud be of some help, or even Koga, but I would still have it to where Sesshomaru gets her in the end. He deserves to be happy. Thank you for your wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 00:24 CST
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is that the end????? it was so intense i almost cried...Seshoumaru was actually well written that it seemed that he would act that way if he was in that situation...u did very well...if u can continue on...but it is still really good...i will continue to read your stories
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Title: WONDERFUL!
Reviewed By: Cianna27889 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know that you thought Sess was OOC, but who is to say that after all that he has seen and experienced since Rin's sacrifice that he has not grown? I think that is what you have shown beautifully, that his character has grown, not just mentally but emotionally. Your discription of the end was written with a great deal of emotion showing that you have personally felt the pain of loss. I have been at many bedsides when the end has taken loved ones, and it is very emotional, very physically tiring, and at the very last, a relief. You showed all those emotions with great care and talent. I cried, I felt the loss. Even to the point of the departure of the soul. In a word your talent is "Wonderful." Now on to the good stuff- I am so glad you are continuing this story! I am completely enthralled, and look forward to the next chapter every time I finish one! I'm not sure that I can guess who the last character is. Sess's mom is one obvious choice, but then I think of Midoriko because of your reference to the Jewel. I can't think of another woman in his life that is qualified to be a spirit guide for him on this journey, unless you have created an OC that is strong and delicate. And I highly doubt that you would us Izaioy unless you are truly trying to show Sess's learning of new found tolerance in the very highest degree. I will make only one suggestion, and it may be something you have already thought of. At the end of Resmiranda's "Tales from the House of the Moon" Sess and Kagome begin their new life together crossing a bridge into Eternity. I would say be careful of bridge references, only to be sure they are different in context. But as talented as you are I'm sure that you don't need that made clear to you. It was only a random thought that ran through my mind when thinking of the Taiyoukai crossing into the Spirit world in search of his eternal beloved. Long live the sons of Taishou! Sincerely, The Ancient Soul of Cianna
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 12:04 CST
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WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! why kags????? i know people kill her alot but i still can't get over it when she dies!!! wonderful as usual! love fluffy @ the end it's SOOOO SWEET!!!! i think that person that was talking to him was his mom
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Reviewed By: Beautiful On: December 01, 2007 02:56 CST
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NOOOOOO!!!!!! (TEARS FALL) THIS CANT BE HAPPENING! WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE AND LEAVE SESSHY ALL ALONE! THEY LOVE EACH OTHER!!!! (tear) are you gonna make a sequal??? please do, i wanna see them happy together. WAAAAA i cant stop crying, im so emotional its sickening, i love the story, i just cant wait for the happy parts if they come, email me so i know you are gonna make a sequal gorgeous_lil_baby08@yahoo.com please respond and let me know thank you.
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2007 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sad chapter. Written very well of course and I did not really enjoy reading it all that much; but it is not your writing. Things of this sad nature are difficult to read. I am happy that you left Sesshomaru hope in the end of a chance to bring her back. As for who the person was; I am thinking it might be Midoriko as in other stories she seems very strong. If it ends up being Kikyo for some reason I will be very surprised at that.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
to guesses either it is his mother the first to break his heart when she dead or it is the first women that Sesh ever fell in love with and is now dead as well is either correct. It has to be a female becuase I can not see his father calling him love do you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter... but sad that kagome died... so what happens now... what will sesshomaru do... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good story; but quite sad so I do hope there is some way to save Kagome from dying. I would hate to see how Sesshomaru will act should he lose her. Please update soon
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god I love this fic and I thought this was the last chapter oh I was gonna be mad!!!!!!!! I want meore please I gotta have more.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 13:18 CST
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ah no i need to know what happens next. I love this story I was hooked so quickly and now i need to know what's next. please please please. :) can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 01:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice but sad update... feel bad for kagome... will she really die... can't sesshomaru do something with the tenseiga or maybe his blood since he's a demon... hope everyone visits kagome at the castle even inuyasha... inuyasha should apologize and try to mend things between them... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo i really hope that you dont kill her because that will be an extreeeeeeemmmly sad chapter....but this is a good chapter...update soon
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Reviewed By: whitetigter_kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it but it can't end there, more chapters please i need to know what happens PLEASE & THANK YOU.
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Reviewed By: rowdyjaner [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2007 23:33 CDT
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ah geez, i'm crying... this is such a sad sad story and captivating inspite of that. i'm glad that kikyo bought the farm and inuyasha sold it to her. she was one shitty little pinch pot. are you going to let kagome live forever with sesshoumaru and rin or am i going to have a lot more crying in my future?
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 17:03 CDT
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good update, do it again
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 04:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so sesshomaru didn't pass through the well... at least he went to kaede and she was able to help... what will inuyasha do now... will kagome die or be revived... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 19:25 CDT
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plz update
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting story... will kagome die or will sesshomaru revive her with tenseiga?... now that kikyo is dead... will inuyasha follow them through the well?... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost started crying you need to update this.
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Reviewed By: . On: July 19, 2007 14:49 CDT
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awesome story i love kagome and sesshoumaru together :) anyways keep up the good work!! hope you update soon:)
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 04:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh You so need to update soon please thank you.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 22:28 CDT
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i love it and its ok it took you a long time to write it but just to tell you that really keep up the good work and im looking foward to the next chapter :)
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Title: oh yeah...
Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 07, 2007 20:19 CDT
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Oh yeah, just to let you know, InuYasha's "kimono" is called a haori. Go on Google and you can eventually find a site that shows pics of the gang and describes what there wearing, and, most importantly- WHAT THE HECK IT'S CALLED Katana : )
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Katana Kiba On: July 04, 2007 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O you're amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz upload the next few chapters VERY SOON i can't wait!!!! & just 2 slap Inuyasha in the face: HAHAHA, YOU GOT POSESSED BY A WALKING PILE OF DIRT!!!!!!!!! *laughs insanely* at least i think he's posessed. if he's doing this of his own free will... *edges toward sword* still, one of the best fics ive read kepp it comin'! Katana
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 23:11 CDT
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i really love it but the thing is im waiting for the momment for inuyasha to come becuase maybe sanog and miroku are starting worry and they told inuyasha that she went to look for him and he went to look for her himself oh well anyways i love the story the story is great!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:44 CDT
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i really love it its a wonderful story !!!
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