| "To College!!" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: _Kamikakushi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
preeeeeeeeety good!!! i wanna see what happens lol UPDATE SOON!
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Title: The Sharykugan and CronXharu
Reviewed By: Cronic On: May 18, 2007 16:27 CDT
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OK me again ^^;. Just gotta say long ago the Sharingan and the Bykugan were gifts to the yondaime!!!(naruto and cronic's dad)By combining the two bloodline limits-he created his own, the Sharykugan!(shar-rok-oo-gan-).It seems Cronic was the only one of the twins that has obtianed it.Now here the deal on his dragon...he can REGUARLY(sp?)to it!!!It once had him endure mental mind attacks,worse than Gaara's Shukaku (to test his ability)!Oh yeah- HE'S A STUD wit da ladies..espeically Miharu X).Come on-CronXHaru For ever. Ok thats all i needed to say.(im a guy by da way)
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Title: Thank You!!!
Reviewed By: Cronic On: May 17, 2007 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HELL YEAH!!!THANK YOU!!!You got a great backstory for Cronic-even the correct appearance!!!Now just on more favor*sheepish grin*can you make this a cronic/miharu fic?!?!?PUH-WEASE???That would be awesome if you can do that for me.movin on.AS A FUTURE NOTICE:CRONIC KICKS ASS!!!Just Sayin'. THANKS!!!^^
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Reviewed By: Peyton On: May 17, 2007 09:51 CDT
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u sooo love makin meh mad but guess wat??? I COULD READ UR STORY!!! HAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* ahem....um where was i? um o ya lmao ok update soon or ill kick ur ass!!!! >
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Title: Naru's Brother!!!
Reviewed By: Update some please!? On: May 15, 2007 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG AMAZING!!!You just gotta update this!!!And as a question-what?does shino like Miharu or something?!Hurry up and add some romance or comfort scenes gosh...but comedy is still great!!And if it isn't too much trouble- when they reach America have Naruto run into his brother.He has short spiked black hair is a little taller than Naruto,and is roughly the same age as him.He is fully in control of the dragon(yeah dragon-no kyuubi)sealed inside of him.he is an excellent shinobi worthy of jounin ranking.It's ok if you add some to him but add him as MY charachter(Cronic) in the disclaimer K?Thanks Bye!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Peyton On: May 14, 2007 15:45 CDT
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*twitch*.....s-sam.......ur dead.....beyond it.............*glares at u* chick b afarid....ill kill ya tomorrow on teh bus.....
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Reviewed By: Peyton On: May 11, 2007 14:16 CDT
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XD no shit sherlock u jus hhhhaaaaaddddd 2 use that huh? lol nice an u had meh beatin ya up wit books an mi labtop oO NEVA TEH LABTOP CHICKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD lol update urs an ill update mine!
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Title: uhef
Reviewed By: Peyton On: May 08, 2007 10:30 CDT
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oi! For summer i wanna play soccer an winter probably snow boaardin lik u huh? lol update alot an u should check out mi stories!!!! kk????????
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: May 07, 2007 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your story is pretty good so far! keep up the good work and by the way you said you didn't know tenten's last name, well she doesn't have one i looked in her databook. Je na! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Mururu On: May 07, 2007 06:38 CDT
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to my knowledge Tenten's clan name has never been mentioned in the anime or manga. So she is like Madonna :P Same goes for Lee. his name is Rock Lee, but Lee for short, but Rock isnt his last name its justhis name in general.... do I make sense?
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Reviewed By: harumikomi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 05:42 CDT
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update!!!!!i wish tat they could use chakra in the college and impress evryone.....
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 02:41 CDT
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ha ha they are going to sports college?? xD how far is it/slash/ how long does it take for NINJA to drive a van from konaha(i spelled that terribly wrong xD) to massechusettes? :P
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Reviewed By: MynameisSeshomaru On: April 23, 2007 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good story Dobe literally means "dead last" it can also mean loser, or it can be used to adress someone that you feel is inferior to yourself.
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Reviewed By: Meru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 08:37 CDT
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he he. its interesting so far, keep it up! I belive 'dobe' is translated to 'dead last'.
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Title: Perfecto! Believe it!
Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 11:42 CDT
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This is a very funny story and I enjoy it so far!
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