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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
What's going on?? Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shinteo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Add Hanabi in, please. It's just cool>:)
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Reviewed By: Shinteo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 00:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Add Hanabi in, please. It's just cool>:)
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Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok well so far it's really good and it gets you hooked after the first mentioning of the whole collar thing so yeah this is a very good fic. anyway I just hope you include Hinata in the harem as she is my fav. pairing with naruto followed by Ino and Sakura tied. Ok well update soon and if your gonna stop writing or go away for a few months let us know cause taht seems to happen to a lot of harem fics that I read so I'm always left hangin... >.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this! update this soon.
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