| "Unnatural Love" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Tj plus digimon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2009 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write another chapter with those two pllease. I LUV this story.
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Title: OMG!!!
Reviewed By: TJ On: September 16, 2009 08:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great please write another chapter soon. Thanks!!!
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Reviewed By: adalily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2009 03:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so addicted to this story please continue soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Jennaxxxxxx On: September 01, 2008 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
oooooook, im sorry to say but ur writing is not particulary...good. it really lacks emotion, and is very one dimensional. wen i read a story withh good writing u am sucked into the story immensly. ur writing just wont let me do that. usually i love twincest stories. but sadly this doesnt cut it for me.
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 19:35 CST
Comment/Review:
alright. i always enjoy forbidden love. please keep updating the story i want to find out what happens.
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Title: Lovely.
Reviewed By: AcceptThisConfession On: October 10, 2007 23:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very lovely story so far, please do continue with more chapters!~ Also not to be a nitpick or anything but I hate when the chapter is over so soon, it's so good! Please make them at least a little longer. Please?
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Reviewed By: tinkle time kelly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Keep writing ! Looking forward to an update. Thanks!
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Title: Arrgh
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did Andrew have to call?! It's not fair. Thought it was good. Update soon. Thanks, bye! *Goes off crying*
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Title: what !!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What thats it! Oh well you still rock.I Really want you to up date soon!DO IT OR DIE!!!!!!!!!!!.LOVE YA!
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Hokey On: June 14, 2007 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! This kicks ass!!! Write more soon!! (Wanna see the juicy bits ; )
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Title: so what's next?
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, great detail. I loved it. Update soon, PLEASE!
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Title: :DD
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 09:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm hooked. I must have more. -bounces up and down.-
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Title: no!!!!!
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please no dot make andrew leave please dont u will make me cry
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Title: Eeee!
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your writing style is great! Brother on brother is always the best X3 Update soon!
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Title: MORE
Reviewed By: inusho [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So does he tell him or not? I like it and it makes it harder for him when he is his brother. You rule!
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