| "Hanyous may not be all the same" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fluffysgirl4ever(nli) On: July 23, 2007 21:39 CDT
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Wow, I want the next chapter and soon... lol
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Title: Jade Lotus
Reviewed By: Jade Lotus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was AWESOME!!!!! I love the new chapter!!! I really like how Sesshomoru is kind of warring with himself about how he feels abaout Kagome. Oh! and the part about the well--that was great!! can't wait to see Kagome's reaction to that. :) I also really liked how Sesshomoru's general is making Sesshomoru jealous by "showing" interest in Kagome. Keep up the awesome work and please up-date again soon! Can't wwait to read more! :)
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Reviewed By: Jade Lotus On: July 16, 2007 10:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I really like how you have Kagome as a deamon. I'm really interested to hear about what her markings mean, and to see how you are going to develope her and Sesshomru's relaionship! I also liked the part where the flea guy was explaining to the group what the fight meant between Kagome and Sesshomru. I laughed so hard at that and when that one deamon was being a little to friendly to Kagome. :) Awesome job and please up-date again soon!
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Original, interesting and intriquing. I am interested in discovering the many pathways this will travel.
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Title: Hanyous May Not Be All The Same
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this because it was interesting to me. It explained things that happened before without continuous flashbacks. It also gives you hints as to what may or may not occur later, explaining in such a way that it still part of the story.
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Reviewed By: black flame kitt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 11:48 CDT
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this is a really great chapter please update asap i really want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: June 05, 2007 11:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting but i was looking forward a little more action than kagome submitting. but other than that the chapter was amusing to read in the least.
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Reviewed By: naughtygrl On: May 31, 2007 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i like this chapter especially since i now know why sess is being so merciful with kagome.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story your rock i love the way you write keep updating pretty please i promise to keep reading i can't get enough of this story it rocks your awesome im becoming one of your biggest fans im adding you to my favorite authors ill check back for updates twice a day keep up the amazing work your newest biggest fan *hugs you*
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cool!! so maybe later on sesshomaru and kagome are going to mate? lemons lemons lemons lemons lemons!!!!!!!!please include lemons!! up date soon! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 09:35 CDT
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finally a update. hehehe. I totally liked this chappy. IK wish u had made it longer... *sigh* but guess all good things must come to an end. :-) I really liked the way u explained the way that Sesshy has now got the right overr Kags. And is there goin to be another person with some interest in Kags.....update soon please. and good luck with school.
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Reviewed By: Sannah On: May 20, 2007 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this Fic. It is very origional, I don't think I'v ever heard of any other kind of bird hanyou. please update and explain what the signifigance of the markings are, please
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 18:38 CDT
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i love this story and how it is going so far! i hope that you will update soon and if you are ever looking for more reviews then sign up with fanfiction.net. the readers are very supportive and honest with what they read. good luck with your next chapter! :)
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!up date!
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