Title: Ooooooooo
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 21:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
1st off, get a beta. 2nd off, could we have a link to the doujinshi? 3rd off, keep going with this. It looks like it has a lot of potential for silliness and naughtiness, though you might have to change the rating on this depending on how graphic you go. Ah, I like how you described Axel, but it was sort of too vague, so I didn't get a really clear picture of what he was wearing. Also, love that you have Xehanort in this instead of his other selves that seem to get all of the play in fics. Really I can't wait to see more of this.
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