| "Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Mystic13135 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sweet. i loved it! ^^
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Reviewed By: Yamis Girlfriend [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok this was good but I almost didnt even bother to read except to give you this review. I hope I dont sound to rude/mean saying this but you need to get rid of that summary saying "i havent written in 6 years blah blah". Most people dont even bother to look at stories whose authors dont have confidence or whatever. And it is beyond agravating not to get a summary. So my suggestion is to, obviously, just change your summary. It would be a shame for some readers to miss such a good story just because the summary was non-existant/terrible. It would also be a shame for you. I hope you take my advise.
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 10:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was a good lemon, especially for it being the first one in 6 years. I did enjoy it, but I like to have more of a story to go with it, personally. I like to know how they got together and stuff like that. But for what it is, it's really good.
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