| "The Ones They Take For Granted" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meggie On: April 04, 2003 03:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You...absolutely...RULE! :D please update soon |
Reviewed By: Vegeta Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 23:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was a really beautiful chapter! I almost cried. Poor Videl, I feel for her...I don't see how anyone could not feel for her.
You're my favourite author now. I swear it, you're writing is so creative and original it takes my breath away! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear these ratings need to go higher than 10!! Obviously, the originality of this fic needs a rating of 100 or more!!
I'm sure you know this, Pareathe, but this is the ONLY het fic left in my top fics of all time!! LOL Only YOU could make me love something so much that isn't yaoi!!
This chapter was wonderful, although I must admit that I LOVED your long chapters!! But beggars can't be choosers, I'll take ANYTHING I can get, even if it's only a page or two!! ^.^
Poor Videl, she must be devastated that Goku is leaving. I usually love Gohan, but damn is he clueless in this fic! I just wanna bitch slap some sense into him!! Pan is wonderful (although I usually hate HER!), and I like how you have given her so much maturity at age 10, and aren't making her a clueless little airhead, like she (and Bra both) are written so often. I'm anxious to read what happens "tomorrow"!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega On: March 14, 2003 10:55 EST
Comment/Review:
I absolutely LOVE this fic. I love it love it love it. Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: hitomi On: February 17, 2003 16:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the lemon scenes are off the wall. Just want a happy ending for Videl and Goku! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mimi H. On: February 17, 2003 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just kicks ass! The plot is really amazing and I like how you've made Goku more than the brainless cartoon character you see in the series. Though the pairing is totally different, it's so well written I can actualy see it and like it. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Stan the MAN On: January 21, 2003 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. I'm a huge fan of Videl and like alternative pairings if they're well written. |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 19:19 EST
Comment/Review:
update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update update.... please? Your driving me nuts! What happens!!!!! @_@ |
Reviewed By: saiyan_teardrop On: January 10, 2003 16:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sooooo wish you will hurry up and update youve got me hanging bad here!!!!!!!!!!! Very good job!!! I love it! |
Reviewed By: Namek Kaia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have NO idea how much I love this fic. It's been one of my favorites since probably July, but I never had time to review because I was reading it on a print out away from home and just never got around to it. God I'm sorry for that! But I thought you had ended it at chapter five. I had no idea there was more!! Glad I decided to read it again just because. ^.^ I love where you're going with it. You are gonna continue this right?! I mean... PLEASE?! I'm dying to know what happens next. Goku can't leave! Videl has to stop him. SOMEONE has to stop him!! Anyways... I totally, absolutely, and completely LOVE this plot. And the fact that your chapters are quite lengthy. Makes for an amazing read! I'm SO anxious for an update. Please end a poor otaku's suffering? Pweety pwease? *puppy dog eyes* lol. I know... that look never works. Nonetheless, I hope you don't keep us waiting too much longer with an update!! I'll be the first one there! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 16:05 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man you had to do that. lol this is good |
Reviewed By: Shi-Saiyan On: December 16, 2002 17:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Write!! Please, I beg you for Kami's sake write!! I need to know more!! |
Reviewed By: autumn On: November 27, 2002 14:06 EST
Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! That is so sad! Videl & Goku are bonding, I just know it. :( Even though I know they should stay with their spouses b/c that's the moral thing to do, I still want Goku & Videl together!! It's just too sad if they're not! Anyway, great chapter as always. Oh, and I really liked the reference you made to no one knowing what really happened during those three years between B/V... that was clever. Looking forward to next update. :) |
Reviewed By: Seelenspiel On: November 07, 2002 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah! keep it going |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 09:56 EST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! I was dying at "I use to bathe you." ^_^
**whispers to Pareathe** happy ending for Videl and Goku, happy ending, happy ending, happy ending, happy ending, peer pressure, happy ending, happy ending, happy ending...
~EM |
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