| "Mischief Makers" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: TennisPirate On: April 11, 2005 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! You had several grammatical errors, and sometimes the writing was a little choppy, but, overall, it was great! I especially liked how the seemingly insignificant encounter at the diner turned out to be the ultimate giveaway. ^_^ You're a great writer; just make sure to reread your work! ~_^ - I am the Tennis Pirate
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Reviewed By: Saiya-jin_Roko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best dragonball Z stories ive ever read.
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2004 20:50 CDT
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This was so fun. Thank you for writing it. I really liked Trunk's tatoo although the tongue piercing did nothing for me. Although in my personal opinion, Trunks may be hot and all that but Goten is not exactly ugly and he should have gotten some female attention also.
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Reviewed By: Katy345 On: February 15, 2004 16:05 CST
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COOL! I can SO see them causing that much trouble! One has a too strict mom, and the other is Vegeta's! Very original! Cute! Adios!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 21:09 CDT
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I remember reading this ages ago! I just never reviewed, until now. Why you ask? I dunno.
Don't get me wrong, the fic was definately funny, but... As a Black female... what was up with the "Rafsafairan wearing FUBU and selling weed and drugs" part???
Seriously... I wanna know... |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: May 27, 2003 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I reviewed this fic when it was posted on ff.net and looked here and could not believe it only had 5 reviews. So here's another one. This is one of the funniest fics I read, and I've read a lot. Hope you to continue Original Prankster is the same way. (TTYL) |
Reviewed By: Ultima [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 12:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
overall this was a hot story that had twist after twist, too bad marron was too dumb. |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: October 02, 2002 22:57 CDT
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i can honestly say as a jamaican i am ever so slightly offended.... |
Reviewed By: TRIGUN(LOVE AND PEACE) On: August 23, 2002 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy like a bunny |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've reviewed it other places, but I'm telling you again. This fic is absolutely one of the funniest works ever written. And I really can't wait for you to update Original Pranksters. Need more laughs, I tell you. Plus, are you going to deprive the readers of MM of the interlude, Thank You Mrs. Robinson? *he he* Well, anyway fantastic fic, loved every moment of it. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it lol |
