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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 13:13 CDT
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Well at least Sess has finally talked to Inu as a person, :D
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Title: Awsome XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 10, 2007 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome plot line, you really captured the characters, I can totally imaging Inuyasha acting like this as he growes older! I was really diappointed that there were only 3 chapters! lol Looking forward to the next installment, keep it up! ;p
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Title: iew
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz update can't wait to see how well the inu brothers are going to get alone. I'm still laughting at sesshoumarus temper tantrum. sorry I haven't updated before I started reading this story on adultfanfiction
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: June 07, 2007 20:01 CDT
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Oh that was too easy, they need to fight a little. After all it's gets the juices flowin'.
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Title: ch 1-3
Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i dont know if i have reviewed any of your chapters before, but i like this. you define the time, and even the moment both inus are vulnerable, rin is gone, and so's kagome, and the two need to be one. in more ways than one i have got to check the warbings on this fic but i hope you plan for them to be together, really together. i daresay you've set it up to be. a nice set=up, not cliche-ish is any manner. so looking forward to the next!
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: June 06, 2007 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply delicious. Like chocolate, can't wait for the next bite. Such intrigue...Will keep reading
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Title: Love it!
Reviewed By: Kamakura Yumi On: June 06, 2007 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See above! I like a slow burner, but that's just me. Great storyline too. I do like your very snotty, wilful Sesshomaru, and your sexy, confident Inuyasha. Your juvenile Shippo 's so cute with his Inuyasha impression! That conversation in the hut was very interesting, very interesting indeed... Methinks it brought out Inuyasha's protective instincts! I have an idea who's going to be seme the first time, but don't tell if I've got it wrong. I like a little suspense, and I'm looking forward to lots of sexual tension. Naturally I can't wait to see what kinds of twists and turns your plot takes as well. I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 08:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
well i guess he really is throwing a tantrum.
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Title: mnesai1`
Reviewed By: mnesai1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're an awesome writer. This is so interesting. This is definitely a "can't-wait-to see-what-happens-next-time" kind of fic. Please honor us with another update soon. Will be reading.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: May 20, 2007 17:50 CDT
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I hope they do more than just talk. I like Shippo all insolent cause of Inuyasha's influence.
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Reviewed By: SoSickOfNyQuil [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's right Sesshoumaru suckit up and man up to what you have to do. Don't be a coward!!! I love Inu and Shippou!!!
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Reviewed By: Vickey On: May 17, 2007 13:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Keep it up. Curious to see where this goes.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is an interesting start to the story. keep it up
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