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| "Minoue" Reviews/Comments [ 521 ] | | Pages (35): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 22:33 EST
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Kagome is indeed a wonderful friend. I think, b/t them all, Sango doesn't stand a chance! Nice to see them work together for her, this can only help her perceptions of them, and of herself (I hope).
| Reviewed By: TAJE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 21:21 EST
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Oh why? Poor Sango! How himiliating! I'm loving this story. Love Sango and Miroku pairing. You have done a wonderful job on this story. Strong enough to keep my attention! Congrats on your nomination is worth it! Peace!
| Reviewed By: Pewter_Wings On: January 14, 2008 11:40 EST
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Thank you so very much for acknowledging the meaning behind Miroku's name. I think you are the first fanfiction writer I have seen do that. This alone made me want to read more of your wonderful story.
| Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 05:20 EST
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*blink blink* wow, an author who actually knows a thing or two about Japanese culture. I'm not used to that... Anyway you are absolutely right that hand holding traditionally was considered unseemly. That's changing as so many of the young people there are being more and more influenced by American culture. So I understand why you say they wouldn't, *smirk* yet I did notice in this newest chapter they held hands often. As to the Sesshy/Kag confrontation... I didn't mean a fight, nor did I expect him to subdue her to prove he was alpha or anything. Merely that since she was in essence a new addition to the family he would want to figure out just where she stood rank wise. My understanding of it that canines have a very extensive hierarchy system, not just alpha and everyone else, but rather everyone sits on a different rung of the ladder with only a few being true peers (same rung). But the idea that it took place "off-screen" works well enough I suppose. All of that stuff aside, about the newest chapter... poor Sango! No doubt Miroku is going to get an eyeful of her scar. I hope she doesn't freak too bad when he does.
| Reviewed By: Redi Hebi On: January 11, 2008 01:30 EST
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Great as always, update again soon!!!!!!
| Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 00:49 EST
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Ah, this chapter made my day. I got the email alert just before I left work, so it was nice to have something to look forward to when I got home, and then you left it on such a cliffhanger! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! This chapter was definitely interesting (and unexpected), the way things worked out. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next with Miroku and Sango, as well as Kagome and Inuyasha.
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 19:27 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But, MAN, it ticked me off...in more than one spot. It's not that I didn't like how it was written; I just hate bigots. And this chapter referred to plenty of them. I'll start with the obvious. I hate that Inuyasha still has such a hard time with bigots attacking him, but at least he found out that he has a new ally, at least publicly.....his brother. Sesshoumaru has finally stepped up to the plate, it seems. That's good. And Inuyasha also got Kagome's unconditional love for him reiterated again, so it went better than it could have once again. Its just a shame that he has to deal with that type of crap at all. There has got to be a special spot in very hot place reserved for bigoted people, fictional or otherwise. The whole notion just burns me up. As for Sango, she is in a heck of a dilemma. She may be reluctant to confide in Miroku about what happened to her, but part of her story seems about to be revealed, whether she's ready or not. Miroku already knows about the scars and the story behind them, of course. But Sango doesn't yet know that. And I can't wait to see if she will at least share part of that with him. She likes him a lot more than she has admitted, even to herself. I love this story, and I will definitely be looking forward to the next update.
| Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:48 EST
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Wow, this chapter is really full of emotion. Love how Sango and Miroku are growing closer, and K stands up for IY. Slowly but surely he's coming out of his shell. Very clever, using the art gallery to hide the youkai underground. And it's still hoity-toiyt enough to satify Sess's ego. Poor Sango, to have to face that. But will she actually escape Miroku, or will this lead to them opening up to each other more, and thus building mutual trust? Much potential there. Very good chapter!
| Title: Oh GOSH!!!
Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 18:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything was going fine!! Okay, except those comments... but everything was just "cool". Even Kagome's Mom was helping Sango, or at least leaving Sango with sthg. to think about! And now, that freaking drunk idiotic guy! Jeez, Sango's inner conflicts and story is appearing like an iceberg! Mmmm... a lot is going to happen next. Maybe not everything will come out in the open but, surely, some issues are going to be addressed or need to. Cathy... you are creating a big, huge mystery here! You are leaving us like RT with her last chapter!! LOL Keep them coming! Thank you a lot for this update!! I was FAN-TAS-TIC!!! And -certainly- Murphy's and his laws... freak me out! LOL. Excellent job!!! Genious! Congrats!!! :clap::clap::clap: (Missing DA emoticons! LOL)
| Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 05:58 EST
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There are two things that I would like to see in the up coming chapter(s) Kagome and Sesshomaru never actually talked to each other, so I am very curious how that will go. There needs to be some kind of confrontation, after all don't all dogs need to establish pecking order? I mean sure he knows she Inuyasha's female, and he is throwing them an engagement party, but he doesn't know how strong willed she is, or how willing she is to protect Inuyasha. The other thing I want to see is more I/K intimacy, not the sex scenes tho more of those are always welcome, but the little things that they don't even know they are doing that let the world know they are a couple. There seems to be a lack of those small little touches and looks couples give each other when they are in that early phases of intimacy. Oh they have the knowing what the other is thinking and feeling down pat... five years will give you that. But they only just started the physical aspect of their relationship, and even if they are both painfully shy about public displays of affection like kissing, I don't think they would stop the hand holding or invasion of each others personal space. The subtle caresses, the getting lost in each other, and forgetting that there is a world outside of them is missing from how they are behaving.
| Reviewed By: magedelbene [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 03:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still catching up! LOL Great chapter!!! Love all the fancy things! LOL Hey, I'm a girl! But what I really enjoyed was reading how both couples are fitting -not the outfits-. Inuyasha and Kagome -as usual- are a gorgeous couple. The way they interact, their "little things", their "knowing how the other is feeling" Love, is a wonderful thing and you show it. Great that Sango is opening herself and, particularly, strongly realizing to herserlf what she is feeling towards Miroku even able to give him a chance when the opportunity arises. It's great to see that she is able to "see" the other Miroku, the one behind the mask. Beautiful work, beautiful chapter! Dear, beyond your "fears" about AU you are doing a splendid and magnificent job!!! Congratulations and keep going!!! Thank you so much for this chapter!! Thank you a lot for one of the best AU stories in IY's fandom!!!
| Title: Gorgeous people!
Reviewed By: Rihannon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:00 EST
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Well… this one was… Ahhh! It just… This is the first time I regret the fact that I have no idea of anything about fashion, designers and jewelry. I barely was able to realize what they all are wearing for the evening. Not your fault. Then, I watched in your journal and found the links to the gowns. Oh! InuYasha would look so incredibly beautiful in that tux. I wish I could see him with my very own eyes. Anyway, I can tell they all were fancy and gorgeous. Good thing, I mean, Sesshomaru is expecting them to be nothing less than appropriate. About the story… InuYasha is so sweet, but also very mature, not like the hanyou from the Feudal Era, but I still see him as the very same good hearted InuYasha we all love. It makes me wonder if Minoue's InuYasha is the result of a different life, I mean, he shows a lot of suffering in his background, but he is a gentleman. Maybe he was born and raised in a time and environment that allowed him to be so, but also comes to my mind the idea of that he could be born a lot of time before (I don't remember if you said how old is he in this story). I'm sure that if our rude favorite hanyou survived the Feudal Era, five hundred (or so) years later he could be like this present time InuYasha, a lot wiser and skillful in many ways. Well, just wondering. I love the way you made InuYasha so different and yet the same. And it also works for Miroku. I guess he has to be like that, and make Sango suffer a little, but I hope he's going to be nice to her, and stop being such a womanizer. But, please… don't rush! I see a lot of potential for them in this story. I'm looking forward, and I know you are very busy, but is not like I'm loosing something by asking: please update soon!
| Title: Please Write More
Reviewed By: inuyashacutie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 07:10 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing i really liked it
| Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 02:23 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha sounded SO gorgeous in this chapter. We know he is anyway....but MAN. Kagome was probably thanking her lucky stars here, lol. As for Sango....wow. If only Miroku knew how much progress he's made. And all of that being a relatively good boy. Sure, he's had a few lapses....but for him, he's beena VERY good boy. And, it's paying off. I can't wait to see how you continue to turn up the heat on them. But, I'm really anxious to see what happens at the gala next time. Kagome's right; Inuyasha is extremely nervous for some reason. Otherwise he wouldn't be doing so much of what he hates....shopping (and, on a side note, he seems to have really good taste). My guess would be that he's afraid that Kagome will be tested by some of the snobs at the event...and some part of him is still afraid that he'll lose her. Man, that witch Kikyo did some damage....but she also had a big assist from some of the other simple-minded bigots of the world. Kagome will just have to show Inuyasha what she's made of....my guess is he'll be pleasantly surprised. I can't wait to see what's next. Good update.
| Reviewed By: hemlockglade On: December 30, 2007 21:51 EST
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"Unable to go back to sleep, Sango got up and went to her computer…"- apparently, I have a dirty mind - Of *course* she'd be doing class readings (^_^;;). Though, shoe shopping websites would not be out of the question, what with the Christian Louboutins appearing later in the story (alas, I'm a Beautifeel girl myself, what with the demands of working feet). As always, enjoying the story and looking forward to the next installment!
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