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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 21:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 10 was nice. But too short! I wanted to read more. I love this story! (and all of your stories) Next Chapter I foresee will be awesome! Keep up the terrific work! --- Amy
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 20:23 EDT
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After all the research I've been doing on Buddhism online, you could tell Miroku to email me for some links (LOL!) I liked the buildup for Kagome's birthday. Miroku means Maitreya, the Buddha to come...was that what the reference was to about his name? If Kagome's old school girlfriends are like they normally are, I can see why she wants Sango with her!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 19, 2007 19:54 EDT
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I love the line of Kagome's about wishing for him, Inuyasha, with every birthday wish. That is just romantic. Thanks for sharing with us.
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Title: Minoue
Reviewed By: vikikibouki@hotmail.com On: September 14, 2007 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Sweetie. I really like what you've written about Inuyasha & Kagome. Having them finally overcome their issues and show each other exactly how they feel towards the end of this chapter was very touching. I loved the way you managed to play everything out with that kiss. But, I gotta admit, I'm just wondering what kind of mischief Miroku is gonna get into when he starts delving into poor Sango's past. I'm truly looking forward to your next chapter. Luv Ya & Leave Ya, JA NE.
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Title: AWW! Together, forever, he gives you his heart and he loves you...lol
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 18:06 EDT
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I love that last one (Chapter 9). That was SO cute! I can't wait until you expand on the Mir/San stuff...I love that pairing...^_^
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Reviewed By: ladygriddlebone [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 14:22 EDT
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I'm finding it hard to review this story without sounding like a broken record... I'm really quite enjoying the progression of events and the way you manage to tie so many bits and pieces of canon into your alternate universe. I also loved the interaction between Sango and Kirara. Looking forward to the next update, as always.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 22:12 EDT
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The interaction between Inuyasha and Kagome was written beautifully- the entire scope of emotions were wonderfully described. I had a feeling Inuyasha wouldn't be able to wait until Sunday..hehe. And I'm curious what kind of trouble Miroku's going to get in now that he's determined to investigate Sango... For some reason that doesn't feel like it'll turn out well...but what do I know?? I loved it! Thanx for sharin'! Reux
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww! A very sweet chapter. I'm glad you're taking everything slow with their character progressions. It really fleshes out the story well. Nice job and I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Fire Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 06:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Going for the 'Aaawwww!' moment, aren't you? Very romantic, and you have set it up for Kagome to get a birthday she's never going to forget. Or, maybe I should say a birthday that Inuyasha is never going to forget! So, is Kirara going to be demon in this? And will she have her transformation state? sighs I guess I'll just have to wait to find out. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 (nsi) On: September 09, 2007 20:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee, I'm all fuzzy inside now!! Love the fluff, can't wait for next update, whenever it may be!
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Reviewed By: antyem13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 20:44 EDT
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InuyashaxKagome fluff yeah!!! I really like that Inuyasha finally admitted what he was feeling. Plus the kiss is always appreciated. Songo seems to be developing more along with Miroku, they both seem more plausible after this chapter for some reason. Over all just good job on the chapter. :) Emily.
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Reviewed By: stargazer824 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 17:43 EDT
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Yay! Another great chapter!!! This story keeps getting better and better!
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I am so glad that Inuyasha and Kagome are FINALLY acting on the love they feel for each other. Those little misunderstandings that they were having at the end were cute.....and so typically them. Kagome jumping to the wrong conclusions and Inuyasha backpedaling desperately to make her understand, lol. This Inuyasha is more mature and patient....but the sentiment is the same. It was so sweet, and Inuyasha deserves to be happy after all the crap that kikyo put him thorugh. Now, if Miroku and Sango could just get situated. That's going to be a lot tougher. I look forward to reading more as soon as you can put it up.
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Reviewed By: jflorea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 13:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet! Great chapter! Sango is really bonding with Kirara and it's so sweet! (Hmm...maybe Kirara will be the first one she opens up to...LOL) Will Kirara transform at Inuyasha's dojo? Bet Sango will be in for a 'big' suprise if she does! Sounds like Miroku will be working hard to find out what happened to Sango so he can help her. He's really concerned about her...I'm afraid his reputation, which seems to have grown beyond reality, will cause him trouble down the road. Inu & Kag are just so warm & fuzzy! It's nice to see them having a relatively easy time in the beginning of their relationship in this story! I'm sure there will be bumps along they way but, guess I've been reading too many angsty fics, it seems like they deserve a break. :)
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Reviewed By: akapiratequeen On: September 09, 2007 12:11 EDT
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YAY!! I am so glad! Great chapter. Soooo satisfying!
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