| "Ebony and Ivory" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: October 12, 2007 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over!!! Ç_________Ç
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: September 19, 2007 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've really enjoyed this series you are doing so much with it and explaining alot. I read it mostly at work and am unable to leave reviews their so wanted to give you to big thumbs up for your story thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
no fair cliffy dont hate you but update soon
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 29, 2007 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huhuhuhuhuh Great as ever... *___* Yun-chan, what are you doing? Ó__Ò Kyo-kun, help him... o/ Kisses!^^
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 23, 2007 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! *______* Yun-kun, plz, get better!! /o/
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 18, 2007 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic... really! I'm reading and I'm loving! It's different, it's kind, has drama, angst... perfect. Very very nice. Congratulations!^^ Kissu.
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Title: Of Chapter 17 & 18
Reviewed By: Vert Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 00:09 EDT
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(Yes I know its my third commentary but why not?) First on chapter 17 then ending to this climaxed brilliantly. Especially since Yuki didn't just immiediatly welcome him with open arms. Anyone who's been in a relationship knows it does not work that way (even if many fanfics might lead you to believe so *rolls eyes). As for Chapter 18 Arigato gosaimasu Authoress-sama!(Thank you for putting up with my whining and posting this for your loyal readers...yes readers the early posting is my doing WOOT for pestering...)
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Reviewed By: sanur On: June 11, 2007 01:16 EDT
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Thanks for sharing the story, I really like it when you make their friendship progress more real. Those boys have *issues* to sort out with, either their own or with each other.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 08, 2007 06:10 EDT
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Wow, Kyo is really confused now. You come up with these chapters quickly, don't you? Well, thank you for updating.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 06, 2007 08:15 EDT
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You update fast. Ah XD I love it how Yuki and Kyo always have their little spats and how Kyo gets so confused then annoy, then scared and then goes back to being confused. XD I would have never though of Kyo whinning like Moiji. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Title: Another review
Reviewed By: Vert_Fey On: June 03, 2007 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh I love it when a story picks up speed. Brilliant. This last chapter was amazing. Kyo's point of veiw is so ...Kyo *snort It was funny too. The meeting of Kyo an Yuki for the first time was absolutely awkard and I died laughing. And the last chapter when they were yelling at each other was perfect. I was a bit worried you were going to be too sentimental (Tohru's vision of the two of them at the lake SCARY). The last two chapters put those to rest. They may understand each other but not after a long hard road YIPPEE for character development.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 02, 2007 21:40 EDT
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Those last two chapters were great! It's so nice to see Yuki and Kyo actually being nice to each other. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: May 31, 2007 06:58 EDT
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Wow, this story is so beautifully written. I love it. I hope there is more to come soon
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 30, 2007 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am highly enjoying this - especially how fast you update this is good some chapters could be more but you leave me hanging--great
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Title: Good Start
Reviewed By: Vert Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. Starts out a bit slow,not much necessarily to catch the readers eye, but seems to be picking up speed. (might put in a more hooking chapter in the beginning since some people are not as fascinated by piano playing as I am) However, the writing is beautiful, and Yuki is described and acts accurately.( It is also very nice to see an OC who isn't a zodiac member from America ;) ) Good Luck look forward to seeing the rest...
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