| "'Plans Of Hebi'" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 08:40 EDT
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Itachi is coming!!! (just had to go and ruin a perfectly good moment)...I really wonder how this is going to turn out.... update soon
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Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 21:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heehee. love it!! update soon! haha. love Suigetsu
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2007 10:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, that's hot. Too hot! I think I'm in pain. But it's a good kind of pain. *swoons* I'm not a big NaruSasu fan--mostly due to the fact that the couple is sooo popular that I've lost interest. But it seems as though I haven't COMPLETELY lost interest.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2007 21:21 EDT
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HOT!!!! *drools*
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Reviewed By: Shingo the Pest On: September 03, 2007 18:14 EDT
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"his organ stretching that pink flesh and how greedy Naruto's lower mouth wrapped around him" Woah, that is some HOT language. 8D~
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 16:47 EDT
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LOVED IT!! can;t wait to see the revenge plan for Itachi
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2007 16:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLZ...Sasuke the pervert. Love it! And, I was beginning to get sick of the SasuNaru thing (I'm the type who loses interest after things become too popular). But you've managed to remind me why I liked them together, in the first place.
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Reviewed By: Shingo the Pest On: August 31, 2007 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was warmer, less dangerous. The lemon reflected that, sensing that Naruto and Sasuke are on safer ground. The changes in Naruto and Sasuke's relationship make sense. I liked watching the team and Naruto interacting; it was amusing, and a place where relationships can be built. Karin's reactions were predicable, but I'd like to see where Suigetsu and Juugo take the friendship. (Will there be friendship?) I think it there should be a spar. They all need to discover each other's strengths, and Naruto's chakra needs to be unsealed.
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Reviewed By: shinobicows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2007 20:41 EDT
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OMG! ITS YOU! Hi, its me, (LOL) we haven't talked in, like, 4ever!! do you even remember me? I'm so glad to see you writing again, even though you've been writing this fic 4ever but, yeah, ne wayz. I love it of course, just like all your other stuff from the very beginning. I hope to see more of this fic soon. I'll be waiting. If you'd like to chat, my e-mail is the same as it was then. (shinobicows@yahoo.com)
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 00:27 EDT
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Yay another chapter..got to say Sasuke really is a pervert.....but that was Hot!! update soon
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH YEAH! I am so glad you updated. i know you said you would, but you really did! I love this story. I'm happy that sasuke's plan came back to bite him in the a$$. Poor Naruto. Hopefully you can update soon, ne?
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Reviewed By: vixypixy_no9(notloggedin) On: August 08, 2007 22:11 EDT
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I LUV IT I LUV IT! This is great so far keep it up cause I want to know what happens!!!! If anyone really loves SasuNaru Yaoi, check out you tube and the two names yourxuke and blondewolf2 who are SasuNaru look alikes and believe it or not, they are a really cute couple and they are together. Check out the "Dirty Naruto" skit on youtube! Spread the word people!!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 14:31 EDT
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It alwas seems that during sex, you forget all arguements normaly.
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Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 01:57 EDT
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damn i wish i knew what happens when naruto wakes up...and more on their thoughts. oh well it was good, and i enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 20:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cool story really interestin. Sad that Sasuke would do something like that to Naruto.... now that he has his own group and everythin...i mean naruto is strong but come on.... Either way the story was Great!! Really liked it...
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