| "Broken Dreams and Demon Nightmares" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: sanity-is-relative On: December 14, 2007 06:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was...amazingly good. i cried like three times. i can't bring myself to read any other stories after this one, nothing has yet to compare. i dont want to lose this feeling your story has left me with. i'm a strong believer that a happy ending is not always the best ending, and this proves my theory. you're writing is great, and if you decided to continue this i'm sure whatever you make will be wonderful, but i must say that i feel this story is perfect as is. i guess i've always been a sucker for a good tragedy. whatever may, keep writing. ~
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Reviewed By: HIME KAGOME 28 On: August 05, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actualy cried !!!!!! It was so tender yet so sad .... but i love it !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 06:19 CDT
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This is really wonderful, I say this as tears linger on my face and I sniffle my brains out. lol You should go on with this, I wrote a short dark drabble once where Kagome killed herself and it STILL wont leave me alone, and I turned that into a story, completed it, and have done a sequel to it, completed it, and now have another sequel cooking in my head. LOL This really was beautiful though, and something I could see happening, I liked how you didn't feel a need to go into detail about how she was wounded.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 05:19 CDT
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wonderful but heartbreaking story... really sad... i liked it though... any plan on making a one shot sequel for this?... hope you do... anyway good work... nice job...
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Reviewed By: neko777 On: July 01, 2007 14:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....................*cry* wow, what a good story, but its extremly depressing, i agree with ScifiAmy, it should be made into a story
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Reviewed By: jess b On: June 26, 2007 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
........ oh....my.....god....i crying....dude bring her back DAMMIT kewl story though
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Also some thing I need to say.....BRING HER BACK IT JUST CAN'T END....its its just to sad my heart is breaking...It hurts....sob...PLEASE BRING HER BACK....sob*
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I....I dont know what to say....It's hard to even write this now.....I just...just can't stop the sobs of tears running down my cheaks...I can hardly breath...so meny stories I've read where they die and stuff but as of yet I've not had one that made me this emotional....they....they didn't have a happy ending...It just ended with all the pain that could settle upon them...Was it right for things to end like that....It pains me....your writing put me there I could feel their pain....and it hurt...the darkness closing in with not a single thing that could be done....Im still cring and that was very sad if only they had a happy ending...Nyuka
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Reviewed By: KagsInu4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIRl you damn near had me crying. You're such a talented writer, and deserve and encore!
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Reviewed By: miftyirlg On: June 22, 2007 22:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
depressing
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 16:18 CDT
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omg. thank u sooooo much 4 thinking about continuing this. i just know that what ever u decide to do with it, it will be FANTASTIC!!!!! take all the time u need. i know how busy summer can be. good luck with this.
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Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 02:09 CDT
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omg. plz, don't let this be the end. the ending is just way to sad. i agree with ScifiArmy, it can be a great beginning to a wonderful story. i wanna cry soooo bad from how sad this is.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 14:50 CDT
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WAHHHHH!!! MY HEART, MY HEART!!!
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Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so heart felt. Please continue. Sessomoru could bring her back with Tensaiga. Please, Please, Please continue! This would be a GREAT beginning to a wonderful story.
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Reviewed By: the bastard child On: May 22, 2007 22:29 CDT
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interesting. liked the last line, but the ending was a little... well, up in the air. i liked it though.
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