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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely perfect! Renji's return - and attempt to return to his place in Rukia's life and bed - was perfectly orchestrated. You can tell that Renji never expected Rukia to not take him back immediately. If only he knew what was going on at his feet! I would love to see Renji's face when he finds out that she has moved on. And when Ichigo shows himself to be possessive where Rukia is concerned. I really enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Sephora Orchid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Naughty, naughty. grins I've decided to read your stuff, and I have to say that you write very well, and that there is a noticeable diffence bewteen your earlier stories and your stories now, a lot of people don't show that sort of improvement.
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Title: OMMG
Reviewed By: copycatter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I been reading it sometimes but this takes the cake!!!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very nice hot office sex
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Title: avidreader
Reviewed By: sesshyrin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! don't know why only few made some review....but for me, this is a damn good story...it is true...so keep up the good work. love how who develop the characters of those two. can't wait for the next installment (keep cross fingers, lol)!!!!
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Title: Since You Asked...
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 00:52 CDT
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Since you asked for a review I thought I'd give you another. Once again, another well done chapter and you deserve lots of praise for it! Don't worry too much if you don't get more reviews, it just means the people reading this wonderful piece of work are too lazy or struck dumb by the craftiness you've put into this story. Great job and I love that you put Renji in it and he's not as happy as he thought he'd be, LOL. I feel sorry for the guy but hey, Ichigo's better for Rukia, even if this isn't the pairing I usually write. Once again, great job and I look forward to the next installment. It's almost disappointing that it's not in the real Bleach universe, the battle between Ichigo and Byakuya would be truly funny if it were over things like the ones described in this story, LOL. No worries. Thanks for the chapter.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Luste [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 00:16 CDT
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OH.....MY.....GOD that office chapter...woow amazing..really f***ing loved it, you have such talent man, speechless, dont know what to say haha...great stuff..can't wait for new chapter /gasp
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2007 01:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
geez i didnt know my opinion is needed here... WELL OF COURSE I LIKE YOUR WORK!!!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn, that was a good chapter. You just keep getting better and better. Loved the slow build-up early in the chapter, with the appearance of Byakuya being a crater in the road. I also definitely appreciated Ichigo standing up to Byakuya; standing up for what he felt, and for the woman he was falling for. And I definitely loved the hot, needy sex at the end. Please updated again soon!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 10:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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falling huh???? good one man! dont make us wait too long for the next chapter. cant wait!
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Title: OMMG
Reviewed By: copycatter [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 08:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just for everything, I love your story these hot lemon scenes are top die for!!!
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Reviewed By: renagrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 23:11 CDT
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I knew Byakuya would find them! Great job on portraying the cold relationship between the siblings...and bravo to Ichigo for showing back up, although we knew he'd do that, too! :D And, the end, oh wow, just...hot...
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Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:47 CDT
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Wow. I was actually blushing through most of that last scene. I'm not going to be able to look at a bowl of fruit the same way for months. If I didn't say so before, loved the touch of Ichigo's motorcycle - he's definitely the cycle type. Question: just how long will it be before they have sex on it? (I've heard you can make love on a moving motorcycle, and these two seem adventurous enough to try it! Or there's always testing the kickstand to destruction) Liked the more subtle hints of their growing relationship - these two are pretty much head over heels, even though they're not ready to admit it, even to themselves. Also liked the lingering details you get with a bad breakup - Rukia mentioning Renji's favorite lingerie, and her wanting to burn it. Not to mention, this is going to be one hell of a shopping trip. That IS going to be the next story, right?
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Title: Hey, awuyzaki!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Does that mean you liked it? *Gives a sly grin to computer* Tituba
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 02:16 CDT
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uh... just asking, where the hell do you get all your fuck'n ideas??? or the hot lemon scenes???>=3
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