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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You just keep getting better and better. I may never look at fruit the same way again. ;p I'm looking forward to the shopping expedition for Rukia's new lingerie - as well as the burning of the old. Great job!
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Reviewed By: LexaLee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story (particularly) out of all your other stories, because of the rawness of character -- and the way the relatonship between Ichigo and Rukia is described. It definitely helps that you have good grammar and punctuation because so many other writers at MediaMiner don't seem to care. ^^ I'm glad you decided to continue with the oneshot, because then the story can be explored further (Complications. Like if Renji came back again, or they had to finally get to the issue of commitment, or something-- I'd love to see that!) Write more soon! -- Lexa
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
sizzling man! (needed a cold shower!) really good story and story line! can't wait for the third installment. totally AU but more so realistic. keep up the good work. pla dont make me wait too long for the third chapter. i,m relly excited how their relationship shall grow. oh yeah, you justmade ichigo look really yummy!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hotness
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Title: ONS
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful. Utterly beautiful! I haven't read a fanfic for a while that doesn't have a bunch of mistakes. I hope you'll write more Ichigoxrukai fanfics!!!! =]
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cool! I'm glad you decided to continue with this. That was incredibly hot seeing Rukia be the one in charge for once. Great (and hot!) stuff!
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 00:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn hotness will be wauting on your next chapter
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Reviewed By: renagrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 23:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you decided to continue this-- you've created an interesting AU world...Not to mention the uber hotness between Rukia and Ichigo... Hope you keep this up!
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Title: ONS
Reviewed By: TaleWeaver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fans self* phew, needed a cold drink after that! I can't imagine canon Ichigo & Rukia having an ONS, but then, that's because I can't imagine them wanting anyone else after having each other. I haven't gotten up to Renji in the anime or manga, but I know who he is-& I really don't think any other characters would have fit the role you needed for this fic. Can I put in my vote for a series of one-shots? I'd like to watch their relationship develop further in future installments, & Rukia deal with whether she wants to explore the freedom of only having herself to answer to, after practically co-habitating with someone else since puberty. I'd really like to see another story where Rukia meets up with Renji again, and they realize their bond is too strong to just not see each other ever again-& Rukia's so elated at having her only family back that she jumps Ichigo to celebrate! I'd also like to see more of the canon characters make appearances, like Ishida did here.
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Reviewed By: renagrrl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 09:26 CDT
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You did a great job with this! Great characterization and you really know how to write out a scene in terms of incorporating all the senses. And I definitely agree with the other reviewers that this should be more than just a oneshot.
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Reviewed By: awuyzaki [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 00:40 CDT
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hmm...very good!...one-shot?...continue?...
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely cool. If Rukia and Ichigo ever reincarnate as "ordinary" people, I could see them meeting like this. Hot and cold, running from one extreme to the other, that is this pair. Very hot, and I loved the abandonment of "sense" that these two showed in their coupling. Great job, and I am looking forward to more stories from you.
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Reviewed By: happygirl24 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah i think you should continue the story i i can tell that this shouldn't be a one shot it should go far
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Reviewed By: jazzjackrabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to tell you tat you are one hell of a writer! I think that youcancontinue writing that story rather than leaving it as a one shot=)) I just loved it and would like to read more thats all! cheers, ~rabbit~
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: PlatinumSabr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can I say? You aren't one of the few authors I've favorited for nothing. Once again you gave a magnificent story to us all and I can't stop from saying that I really appreciate your use of grammar. I know that may sound wierd but like I say in most of my other reviews I give to other people: some writers I've read wouldn't know what a comma or a period was if it came up behind them and bit them in the ass. This was a great story and I'd be lying if I said I wasn't disappointed that this was a one-shot. Oh well, you can't have everything. Thanks for the great story and I look forward to your next one.
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