| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Piccolodork On: July 03, 2002 20:46 EDT
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i love this fic a lot! i had never even heard of mediaminor untill cruddy fanfcition.net decided to be evil and break down. im really oe for piccolo fics, lol, but Vegeta and bulma fics are just as good! ur an amazing author! keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 17:34 EDT
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Can't wait for the next chap!! |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 17:21 EDT
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ack.. man you just love ending these on a really emotional moment.. that's good, keeps us coming back for more more MORE! it's kinda funny.. I almost know how Vegeta feels about having to speed things up.. I can hardly take it, he must be going nuts! *LOL* |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: July 03, 2002 11:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, a wonderful job. I, for one, am also ecstatic to see it posted so soon, too. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 03, 2002 03:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, be that way. You're gonna string this alone till you drive me crazy. I loved it and I can't wait till you update again. |
Reviewed By: nanaseven On: July 02, 2002 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! well, i finally got my internet back up and one of the first things i read was this fic! lemme tell you, abbi, it's awesome. it's so un-cliche! you've honed vegeta's personality into your own little *thing* while still keeping him in-character (very cool) and i am nuts over the idea of the positive and negative energies. nice racy scenes, by the way--i never knew you had it in you! *wink, nudge* keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: July 01, 2002 08:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that should be "He wasn't the kindest person"... there's no such thing as "most kind" but that's my only nit this time. Sorry, I teach English to non-native speakers and mistaken grammer just glows red and begs me to fix it. Your story is great, and I'll try to be patient while waiting for the next chapter. I liked that Bulma was seeing Vegeta as I imagine he still sees himself. :) |
Reviewed By: miayu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 02:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh! i haven't read a b/v fic like this in such a long time. You have know idea how many fics I've read, and yours is certainly one that stands out!! Hey, I'll try to draw you some fanart art, okay? You can check out the art I've already done on mediaminer. Keep up the good work. I'm really enjoying it. I thought it was going to be another cliche 'vejita gores into heat story' but I was pleasently suprised. I'm also glad that you decided NOT to give Bulma extra powers. That would of cheapened it. Love it! Love it!
miayu |
Reviewed By: OujoNoSuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 18:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! Oh, i love this fic. I haven't ever seen the whole bond consept describe like this! I love it, please write somemore so we can all enjoy it! You're really talented. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 30, 2002 01:49 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! The feeling of their bond pulling them together, their thoughts about each other, Bulma's dream...This chapter was excellent!! |
Reviewed By: louie On: June 30, 2002 00:33 EDT
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UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is to good to be left unfinished!!!!!!! SO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 22:09 EDT
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i like the image. i was thinking of drawing something similar to that myself. i love that scene... ^^ thanx for drawing the pictures! |
Reviewed By: Amanda On: July 05, 2002 02:19 EDT
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I LOVE this story (and Geta too) I wished it was finished already!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, so keep writing! This is definaltly one of the best V/B stories I've read and there are not many out there. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 20:46 EDT
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ok.. this is what I wanted to draw ever since I read your scene on the balconey with him glowing and stuff.. I'm no award winning artist so I'm quite pleased with how it turned out.. please feel free to put this on your site, or hand it out to friends or whatever, it's my gift to you for writing such a nice story :)
http://www.mediaminer.org/fanart/view.php?id=47249
I hope you like it, I enjoyed working on it :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 23, 2002 07:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things seemed to happen a little quickly and without much reason here, but overall it's still good work. :) |
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