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| "Breaking Free" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Title: Amazing Story!
Reviewed By: Menarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2013 23:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have finally caught up with this..! And let me tell, I am definitely enjoying this..! I love how everyone is portrayed and it's super unique. LOL I wanted to write also about how you added Ranma 1/2 characters (Especially Nabiki hitting Nakatsuki) and Tenchi Muyo (Ryouko..!) Overall, this is great. I do hope you continue this. :) | Title: Great story
Reviewed By: LittleMica [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2009 16:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading your story, it was a bit of change from bunch of other fanfictions around here... it had more style, was more unique, and it was darn enjoyable to read, hope to see more of it sometime.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2007 14:34 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I like this concept, though it does feel an awfully lot like Utena except Usagi isn't pulling a sword out of Rei's chest. But, eh, that's forgivable. I like the angle about why Usagi is pretending to be a boy and all the problems it causes her. I'm never been a big fan of making Mamoru the bad guy, (I guess I feel like he gets a bad rap from fanfic writers) but this story really needs a bad guy so why not go all out? For some reason I imagine Dishonest John tiptoeing about whenever Mamoru appears in the story. ... That's for all you Beany and Cecil fans out there. Technically, no big issues, though it bugs me to read a story that's in present tense when it isn't first person, but at least you're consistent. Anyway, with all the twist and turns, it makes for an interesting read. Here's hoping Dishonest Mamoru gets his in the end. Cheers!
| Reviewed By: lionspaw2182 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 21:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, my friend, you have done it. :) I personally am a fan of Mamoru, but you just make him seem so....evil...AH well, to each his own. I hope my preferences towards Mamoru don't prevent you from reading any of my stories (hint, hint...:)) Once again, a wonderful installment, I hope to see something else soon...I'll slip into mediaminer any day to read an update on your story...
| Reviewed By: Lionspaw2182 (not signed in) On: July 03, 2007 16:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice twist!!! I love the fact that you are planning on everyone having a significant other...I'm a true romantic at heart and I like everyone having someone... I really enjoyed these last two updates....I'll have you know....I slipped on to mediaminer today JUST to read your story....:) I will be wating with baited breath to see how the next part turns out...:)
| Reviewed By: lionspaw2182 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 16:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I notice you don't have any reviews on Mediaminer, so I decided to write one. I LOVE this story!!! It is so creative and so...angsty...(if that's even a word) I can just see what Usagi would look like, dressed like a boy...:) Oooo....Predictions, predictions on who the couples will be.... I thought Minako and Hotaru would be a couple until you brought in Yomiko/Chibi-usa, and that Sets and Usa's aunt (the yahtzee aunt) would be a couple...but again, now we have Minako alone. So are you going to make Setsuna and Minako a couple??? I kind of like them as a couple... I usually like Mamoru, but you make his jerkiness seem so....so....believable.:) I hope you continue soon because I want to know how this story ends!!!
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