| "My Will" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2007 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Heya sweetie! Sorry I'm late, basically I dont have internet at home still, and my friend just csaves the stories I read to my memory stick and I read them at home - but I cant always get online to review, so sowwy *huggle* Vewwy good btw. I had lots of nice chappies to read when I went to my friends this weekend ^_^ Keep up the good work! It's definately getting more interesting, Inuyasha is so cutsie *squeels* okay, gotta give my friend back her net now 0_0 see ya sweetie! *chu* -- Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's a really good plot but you should consider separating dialogues and writing more descriptive paragraphs... just a thought though
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Reviewed By: DriftingRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey miley! I just read your chapter. Sorry I haven't reviewed lately, I have been really busy. Your story is really good though, oh and I added you to my favorite authors list. Love ya!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 00:10 CDT
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i wonder whats going to hapen??? ummmm lol well now im wishing it was september lol well i can't wait
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! You're just making me so mad at Kagome's friends. :) That's okay though, I don't like them anyway, as I've mentioned before. Yeah, it's been very nice to get to know you. I love having a friend my age who loves InuYasha as much as I do! :D
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 14:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for mentioning my story miley! I really appreciate it! ;D
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! What exactly are InuYasha and Shippo wagering in the bet? Do you know? Anyway, it's really good. :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 19:43 CDT
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love it :P
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Title: Awesomw
Reviewed By: Phoebe On: July 21, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely love your writting! keep up the wonderfull work! you are terrific! Sorry to hear about you being home sick and even worse aboy no one leaving responses
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Title: Way To Go! :)
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi miley! Thanks for reviewing on my story! It always means a lot to me to get reviews! Anyways, I LOVE your story! God, I hate Kagome's friends. HaHa! Don't like Hojo either. The guy can't take no for an answer! A lot like a certain wolf demon we all know. LOL! I'm looking forward to your next chapter! :D
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Reviewed By: DriftingRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 14:57 CDT
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Hey miley! I just wanted to tell you that your story is really good. I can't wait to see what happens when Kagome finds out that she has to kiss Hojo! Love ya! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 22:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more plz can't wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Phew! Finally read 'em all ^_^ Loved 'em i really did sweetie. Sorry it took me so long tp get round to it, feel guilty since you always review mine like right away *hugs to make up for it* Neways, I believe your writings are very good, and i'm glad I am able to finally get up to date with yuor ficcie ^_^ update soon, and good luck >.< -- Shigure-san
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 09:34 CDT
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Huh? Inuyasha let Kagome go so quickly? Weird but quite a good story nonetheless.
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Reviewed By: DriftingRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 20:34 CDT
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hey miley. Sorry I haven't got to review yet. But I really like your story! I'm a little confused though. Oh well. Please write more! Love ya!
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Reviewed By: alex hart On: June 24, 2007 16:00 CDT
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im glad you updated.i like it so far. hope to read more soon!please update!
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Title: Looove it
Reviewed By: Kumike On: June 17, 2007 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! u really need to write more i mean u just can't leave the suspense like that! hope u wirte more soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: writerr On: June 11, 2007 17:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more plz
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Reviewed By: DriftingRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey miley! I just wanted to see your story. It's really good but then to end it like that! Oh! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!
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Title: *hugs*
Reviewed By: Shigure-san [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 06:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heyo sweetie *hugs ya* aww, bless you're so sweet. Thanks for mentioning me, it means alot to know I inspire you so much ^_^ Well, I quite liked this. Damn dont end there >.< Update you meanie! SI this payback for all the cliffies in my fics or somethin'? XD Well, i beta for two really sweet people, and I'll tell you what I tell them, K? Ignore flames or meanness if you get any, they just suck and need to be burned XD In action scenes keep the words fast moving and the sentences shorter. In calm, quiet scenes you could use longer, more detailed sentences. Try never to use the same adjective more than once in a paragraph. Errr, yeah, thats all the 'wisdom' i have to depart with XD Again, thankies for mentioning me, it makes me feel wuved ^_^ *crushes you in a hug* Great beginning, I hope to see updates in the future ^.^ Keep it up! And thanks for always being a fan *still hugging you* -- Love Shigure-san x chuu x
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Reviewed By: hime kagome 28 On: June 09, 2007 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really want to know what happens next !!! you better update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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