| "This Sesshoumaru Needs Not A Mate" Reviews/Comments [ 99 ] |
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exquisite. ^_^
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:00 CDT
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Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 16:00 CDT
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A few little confusing points but I'm sure you will explain them better in the future. Mostly a transitional plot filling chapter but those are needed as well or you have nothing but a lot of plot holes leaving us going "What? Why did that happen?" I can't stand those types of stories. I'm on the edge of my seat to find out the rest. ~*Luce*~
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Reviewed By: silver_wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 01:06 CDT
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Absolutely lovely so far. I look forward to further installments. *^_^*
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 21:11 CDT
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Well you handled that adroitly, you had the task of switchiong the relationship from lust and senseless sex, to tenderness and the path towards mates. I applaud. Also the fact that Inuyasha is starting to grow up and take on some resposibilities shows you know how to grow a character. I hope poor Rin is not dead and is only possessed, she's one of my favorite characters. Jii-chan and Sesshoumaru's shaky peace adds an overtly comedic aspect that balances well. Lovely as always. ~*Luce*~
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 19:26 CDT
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I was having a really exhausting day, and thinking about crashing several times, but I'm glad I didn't. I got to read the latest chater of my favorite Sess/kag story! Yay! They finally mated! :) Now I can go sleep.
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Title: Great chap as always ^ ~
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 15:43 CDT
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Love the resent chap you had successfully put up for everyone in such a short time it seems. Yoiu are well skilled huh? Juggling work and writting as well as posting new chapters online has to be pretty hard ne? Splended chapter and I can't wait 'til I can read the next one. Keep up your great work cuz your fans are always looking foward the next upbringing lol ^ ~ See yas!
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Reviewed By: LNluvsHostile17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 16:47 CDT
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Another amazing chapter, not that that's a surprise. OMG OMG OMG I've been freaking our over Harry Potter! I finished it in five hours last saturday, and had to re-read the entire series. Twice! Have you finished it yet? It's so good...I cired the hardest when Dobby died!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!I'm sorry! If you haven't finished it yet I just spolied it! But I can't go back and delete it, because for some reason I have this subconscience urge to spoil it for everyone! Even if I don't want to!! Can you tell I'm freaking out about it?!?!?
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 23:54 CDT
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Oh God! A tape measure! I loved it, I was laughing the whole way through. I can't wait to see what tricks Jii-chan has up his sleeve for dealing with his new grandson-in-law to be, and how long will our demon in angels clothing hold his oh so short temper. I anticipate some lemon juice in the coming chapter? Write on dear artist, write on. ~*Luce*~
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Title: Yes!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:28 CDT
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Loved the latest chapter of course ^ ^ great job on it and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved the new chapter ^^b lol it was great, but where IS shippo? :O waiting for the new chappy! ^^
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Reviewed By: oldestmaiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
From exciting, entertaining, nail biting intensity to comic relief...you've had me hooked all the way
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 01:35 CDT
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Ack! I hope you're not getting to predictable on me I would be sad.*Exudes Extreme Sarcasm* I sit in contimplation of the next unexpected twist. A very meaty chapter, I approve. I too will be indulging in Potter debauchery this weekend.
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Title: Well written
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 18:38 CDT
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I love the latest chapter you did ^ ^ Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Lucifer_Spades [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! You are improving all aspects of the story the plot is fleshing out nicely having started a just tad on the sappy side (not bad just slightly reminiscent of a dime store romance novel), the charictors are looking to have more substance then originally met the eye. Once again I am enthralled.
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