| "Dairy of a Timid Tiger Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Title: Fourth Chap Complete meow!!
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 21:54 CDT
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Okay, fourth chap is done now meow!! Fast ain't I meow? Well I hope you read it but just to be a bit curious, what do YOU think is gonna happen in the next chap meow? Hmm? ^^
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Title: Don't worry meow!! ^^
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 19:48 CDT
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Third chap is done--I'm sorry if it's short, but my dad got on my last nerves and made me get off--but don't worry, I'm gonna work on the fourth chap ASAP meow!! ^^
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Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add another chappy soon.
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Title: Ideas, meow...Hmm...
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 11:52 CDT
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Meow I'm about to work on my third chapter of my story and I need some pointers and stuff meow. Oh, um I'll give you guys a lil' summary on what the thrid chap is about: Maruu is gonna try to make a move on Knuckles, just to give him a hint on what she wants from him--Also, Maruu later finds out that her web diary ends up on the internet. Give me some tips before I do the thrid chap meow. Thank you for your time meow. ^^
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Title: Thanks, meow!!
Reviewed By: Koneko-neechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 15:29 CDT
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Meow thank you for the review--I really hope I get more, meow. More reviews give me confidence, meow! I'm gonna work on my second chap right now! Also, happy 4th of July all. ^^
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: Spirit-world-death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Tip, Excersize use of commas instead of periods at the end of quotations. other than that... this chapter was kinda anticlimactic.
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