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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this chapter to be very slow but informative. I hope Inuyasha and Kagome figure everything out, I also wish you luck on finding a way to keep from getting writers block. Thanks for updating again. I look forward to the up coming chapters.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 03:36 CDT
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So happy that I found this story, I haven't read one yet with Kagome turning into a serpeant creature at night so I'm real intrested to see how this will turn out. Inuyasha doesn't seem remorseful for what he did to Kagome, does he remember because if he's just thinking of not apologizing for it, he really deserved to be sat by Kagome 20x's. Well hope to read more soon, great story.
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the quick update. As you know the spacing was to close, it was hard on the eyes, but I couldn't stop reading. Intreging... I wonder if Inu knows what his demon side did to Kags. I love you have the beads! Great Chapter. Keep up the wonderful work. I can't wait for the next chapter!! Update Soon PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another review, I really like where this story is going. I can't wait to read what next you have instore, and I finally know what that green serpent thing is that was in Inuyasha's dream. I wonder how they curse can be lift if it can at all. well really nice job, update soon!
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Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and WOW it is very good. I am so enjoying it. Kikyo is not a bitch that one is different. But she seems nice, I hope Inu breaks up with her, but I do feel bad for her you made her too nice. Is she friends with Sango? I hope not, that would be awkward when Inu and Kags start dating. At least I hope that they do. So Kags has a curse, wondering what that is. I can't wait for your next chapter. I sitting at the edge of my seat.... Update Soon PLEASE!
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Title: Mysterious Kagome
Reviewed By: Seriah Black [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Kikyo isn't acting like a b****! That's really interesting. And Inuyasha's youkai is coming out! Can't wait to see what happens between that and sunset and Kouga. I'd like to know a bit more about the curse though, and how that relates to the snake/soul collector/thing. I'm kinda confused on Kagome and Inuyasha's connection, but I'm assuming you'll explain that as the story progresses? And what IS Kagome anyhow?
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Reviewed By: Mabbline991220 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 09:15 CDT
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Bold 0o0o0o0o0o the yuiko comes out something HAPPENIN I hope I really like this chapter overall I think that your story will be a big succsess!!! Keep on writing. I laughed out loud when I heard the sunset curfew...Can you relate?? That't sad I hope you fix that. So0o0o0o0o Is their relationship is going to get better now??? In a way I'll feel bad for Kikyo...nawww okay I'm done with my talking!!!Please update soon
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good, yeah I understand about not being able to make the chapters for this fiction longer and thank you for updating so soon. I wonder what's going to happen now, keep up the good work.
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Title: Maybeline
Reviewed By: Mabbline991220 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 21:38 CDT
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hey I really like this story it's really good can't WAI TILL YOUR NEXT CHAPTER yeah you should fix your format spacing ya know just tellin ya but other than everthing else is all good
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Reviewed By: lemon_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 13:17 CDT
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well.. the structure of the story needs to be fixed, as in spaces and indents and stuff... but other than that, its kind of good
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 07:57 CDT
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really interesting story... a lot of mystery surrounding Kagome... i like it... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 04:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to read the next chapter in this story. It is really good so far. But if you could make the chapters longer that would be wonderful, unless longer chapters meant longer waiting periods then forget I mentioned it. Oh and thank you for the dedication.
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 00:06 CDT
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Interesting, very interesting.. I look forward to your other chapters and can't wait to see the story unfold. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Palmerdreams [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, this is really good so far. I hope you continue, I can't wait to read the rest of the story. I also love the concept. Thanks for creating the story.
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Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 11:15 CDT
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CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Not that I'm begging or anything... ;)
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