| "Reluctant Companion" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 18:30 CDT
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my poor lovely WuFei...*cuddles her shenlong plush* i'm gona beat daddy up with a ruber duck!
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Reviewed By: Mhorag On: July 09, 2007 09:54 CDT
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Consider this a thank-you for making this chapter a well-done non-consensual chappie! Only a few minor squicks for me, just because of my own history, so I'm very happy with this chapter. I'm hoping that in further chapters consent will be obtained in spite of Milliardo's slave status, simply because Wufei understands justice. I'm figuring there will be a few more episodes of Milliardo being "uppity", but all in all, he is doing a pretty good job of accepting his punishment for treason. Considering that the traditional punishment for treason has been for the condemned to be hanged, drawn, and quartered (see the film Braveheart for details), it could have been worse. I think I know what's going to happy regarding Wufei's feet (may I recommend Lisa See's Snowflower and the Secret Fan as research material?), but I'm uncertain what could possibly be wrong with the rest of Wufei's body that he wouldn't want to be seen. I'm looking forward to additional chapters in this quite fascinating world!
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Title: Awesome!!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: July 08, 2007 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwwwwwww!! I just love this story!!!!! its so good! I cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 23:51 CDT
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Another great chappie! You've got me hooked. And your muse seems to be keeping you in plenty of ideas. lol
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 22:45 CDT
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going great..as always looking forward to next chapter..good luck and keep writing your wonderful stories
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Reviewed By: Mhorag On: July 03, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your previous fic The Sampson Effect very much. I'm normally not too much into the whole slave genre, but I thought you handled it well. I especially appreciated the fact that Duo was not forced into sexual activity, even though he was Heero's slave. I do have a concern with the direction this fic is headed. Please, please, PLEASE, don't turn Wufei into just another rapist who is overcome with guilt and regret so that his victim (Milliardo) then forgives all and it ends with flowers and bunnies. I HATE those fics with a screaming passion - I avoid rape fics with a vengeance, and I'm cautious about non-con stories. I desperately want to be wrong about what I think I see coming - which is Wufei drugging Milliardo with various aphrodisiacs so that he responds sexually. It's still rape. I'm willing to admit it's probably a quirk of mine - having been in a situation where my consent was considered irrelevant (although I managed to avoid being physically penetrated), consent is a HUGE issue for me. I'm also very disappointed that Wufei (temper notwithstanding) doesn't bother to TELL Milliardo what he's done wrong, and Milliardo never ASKS straight out "Tell me what I've done wrong." I really, really want to keep reading this fic, because I enjoy your writing and the world you've created. So I'm waiting for the next chapter with fingers crossed that you will pleasantly surprise me with Wufei coming to his senses before he forces Milliardo into sex. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 19:42 CDT
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hmm..what'll happen when wufei finds out mili found that stuff in the sistern..ohh lordy will he feel disgusted with him self..
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Reviewed By: Crazy_Lil_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 21:09 CDT
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I'm loving how this is going ^^ I wonder if Heero & Duo will be making an appearance. I could just see Duo warning Milliardo all about Wufei's icky teas xD And Kix's last comment made me die laughing - is that why Wufei was limping?? xDD
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 15:34 CDT
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no..i dont thin that wufei brused his foot..more like...having issues with his 3rd leg, i'm guessing
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 15:22 CDT
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looking good, i've always enjoyed reading your stores..
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Title: Loves it!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 02:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapt 3 wubear is a little meanie!
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Title: O.o
Reviewed By: nekuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya, I decided to see what else you have up and I ran across this. It's definately...interesting. I think I like it so far. I'm definately dying to read more; that's for sure. By the way, go back and check the very very last couple of sentances. I don't know if the pucntuation is missing, or if it's a line that's not supposed to be there, but you've got an odd sentance there. Well, good luck, and know I'm waiting for more wonderful stuff from you. ^_^ Neku
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 04:49 CDT
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SEQUAL YAY!!! It's good too! Milliardo's in for it that's for sure. Go Wufei!!!
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome Story! I read the first one and i love the sequel!
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Reviewed By: SisterRaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, a sequel! Thank you! I'm so happy that WuFei is getting some face time in here. I look forward to seeing how he trains "Milli."
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