"Lick the Strawberry" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: ForgottenPrincess...not signed in On: June 27, 2007 01:35 CDT Comment/Review: I fist have to tell you that i love the title to this fic. Naruto is pretty smart he played along with sasuke. I really want to know what is going to happen. When I read this story a while ago it was only the second chapter as the first was mia. Now you seem to be writing it again and i am glad. I hope you get the opportunity to update more often. I will continue to support you, i really enjoy this fic.
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Reviewed By: crescent-moon-demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 20:07 CDT Comment/Review: YIPPPPEEEE!! itz the resurrection of LTS!! fanfiction.net can't handle true talent...even so i'm glad u were able 2 update this story!! I shall remain forever vigilant!! ^^ just remember 2 update whenever possible
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Reviewed By: ecy On: June 23, 2007 05:57 CDT Comment/Review: I love your story! But i think that ch 3 is from lighted wings not lts. lol
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 00:15 CDT Comment/Review: I'm sorry but I have a question. Did you have to delete this fic from mediaminer, or just fanfiction.net? Sorry if this is a hassle, but do you think you can PM me the answer, I hate to ask that of you, it's just that I'm hooked on this story and I want to read the whole thing. In other words, I'm a newly devoted fan of yours ^^
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Reviewed By: Moonlover825 On: June 22, 2007 19:54 CDT Comment/Review: Hey!! I love this story!! You have my support!! Poor Naru-chan!! When will you tell me who did this to him!! I'll kill those people mwuhahahaha...excuse me, I'm a bit sugar high...
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Reviewed By: Uiramatos On: June 22, 2007 18:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I like the way you write, it's easy for me (a brazilian guy) understand. The fic is really original, I never thought about Sasuke like that... but it suits him well. The fic is not boring, and my english isn't good enough to rating your spelling and grammar. so I give you a Nine. Whem are you going to update? I can't wait for the next chapter... I know I said it before, but, I'm from brazil, so forgive my spelling and grammar erros. Uira Norberto Matos de Almeida
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 04:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor Sasuke, being tormented like that! Loved the last two chapters & I look forward to more and reading more of Sasuke's thoughts and feelings for the little Naruto ^^
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 01:41 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is so amazingly adorable, I can't even express the cutness of these fanfics. I haven't read the comments that other people have left for you, but I'm sure that these topics have been brought up. 1) Sasuke and Naruto are the same age, but I guess this is a fan fic, you can make them any age you damn well please. 2) the first fic you posted said it was the third chapter, and what did it have to do with the story line of the other two chapters? Just curious. Anyway, I love the fics, keep 'em up, your a great writer and I'm greatly looking forward to reading the next chapter ^^
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Reviewed By: Encumbrance On: June 20, 2007 20:12 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I can't believe your story was deleted! That's NOT fair AT ALL!!! This story is one of my favorites!! Can you upload it on mediaminer or lj? It left off in a really interesting spot on ff. Man, I can't believe this happened! Your fic had NOTHING bad in it compared to lots of others!
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Reviewed By: crescent-moon-demon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 17:30 CDT Comment/Review: Waaghh!! Mistress-Starfire i'm so sad that u had 2 delete ur fanfiction.net version of this fic. Please 4 the sake of ur fans, update this 1 so i may continue 2 read about those beloved 2!! oh...just a question, exactly wat were u reported 4, wat was wrong with ur story? n Wat bastards reported u, just so i kno....
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 20:04 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow... you got me hooked. I like it a lot! It's believeble and I can see every scene clearky in my head. The thoughts that Sasuke has, especially when he started to think about how sick he was really captured me. Honestly, such scenes and thoughts makes these kind of fics interesting and hopefully even more passionate. It's not that I accept pedophiliacs in real life, but shouta-con is one of my major passions and so... Yeah, generally, I love it. ^^ I hope you update soon, and I'm honestly looking forward to lime or lemon... or something. ^^ I'm a bit of a perv, sorry 'bout that. Keep up, you rock! *chu*
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Reviewed By: killingdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 07:11 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it's good you should keep writing and tell whats gonna happen
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Reviewed By: Clumsy Kitten (too lazy to log in xD) On: June 14, 2007 16:52 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: -giggle- This looks like it's going to be a fun story! Normally I don't review, but I really wanna see more? I wonder if I'll get condemned by a random flamer for liking this...oh well! ^^ Pwease write more!
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Reviewed By: Kai28(not logged in) On: June 13, 2007 23:26 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: im one of kais female account sharers anywhoo what an interesting way of starting a story. Well keep up the good job and ill be waiting for your update.
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 07:42 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Is this going to be a oneshot? Or multi chapters? Because I love the story idea and would love to read more. The introduction just pulled me it and the way it was told is unique. I really hope there is more chapters on the way. Keep up the great writing ^__^
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