| "Heart's Treasures" Reviews/Comments [ 199 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cherry On: September 15, 2002 11:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you took a classic story and put it with some of my favorite characters. I love the story!!! And I want to read more. As for style and grammer- there is much to be desired. Try reading them allowed. This will help with the flow- aka putting commas in to take a break. I've learned that if you can read a sentence without a pause no comma is needed, however, if you pause while reading the sentence, place a comma where you paused. I look forward to reading more of this story. Thank you very much for sharing it. |
Reviewed By: Cherry On: September 15, 2002 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you took a classic story and put it with some of my favorite characters. I love the story!!! And I want to read more. As for style and grammer- there is much to be desired. Try reading them allowed. This will help with the flow- aka putting commas in to take a break. I've learned that if you can read a sentence without a pause no comma is needed, however, if you pause while reading the sentence, place a comma where you paused. I look forward to reading more of this story. Thank you very much for sharing it. |
Reviewed By: poetrybird [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again, u have left me wordless in ur stories. The creativity in ur writing is exquisitly beautiful. I've been totally reading ur fanfics.... I hope u do when an award for writing stories......N i hope u a great journey of writting more fanfics like this... bye |
Reviewed By: poetrybird [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 21:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Again you've out done ur self. You can create so many images with all ur writing. I think you have inspired meh to go back to writing poetry and start pickign up books again. Reading takes meh somewhere else like heaven or paradise. You've brought meh back mah paradise and heaven.. the joy of reading ur stories n inspiring meh to go back to writing/ reading poetry. thank you much |
Reviewed By: The_Female_Inu_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I BEG YOU, PLEASE HURRY AND CONTINUE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2002 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
You must continue as soon as you have the time, I love this fic and I love the original story! I still love CardCaptor Sakura, but oddly, I have been drawn to Dragon Ball Z(Japanese Version ONLY) maybe it's because Akira Toriyama does add some perverted comments and I enjoy to laugh at them. CardCaptor Sakura is still my top fav anime, but Dragon Ball/Z has now beaten Digimon and is in second place. Continue this wonderful story as soon as you have some time Starlight Rose |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow u have done a great job on fixing this story keep up the great work and plz write soon!! |
Reviewed By: ForeverDestiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your fanfic. I love how it's based on a real fairy tale. I was in the production, Once on This Island, recently and we talked about what fairytales were originally like and stories based on them. Needless to say, most of my information came from you and my story based on an original fairytale was yours. I think your rewrite is creative and writing on WORDPAD! Wow. That would be hard. To do that well with spelling and grammer on Wordpad is amazing. (I thought I was doing well without a beta reader!). There isn't much I don't like about your fic. At first I didn't really enjoy the side-E+T-story but it's growing on me. I too enjoy long and helpful reviews. I haven't gotten any yet, but I hope this is long if not helpful. I don't think it's particularily helpful but I hope it was fun to read. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! -ForeverDestiny
PS-My teepee really liked your story too! ;) |
Reviewed By: Lia On: August 14, 2002 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to thank you for writting this great fic, I love sakura and syaoran, and specially fics about them, this is one of the best fics I have ever read, I love how you decribe everything and how well you can make sakura and syaoran be perfect for each other, please please, continue this fic, I mean, for me this is the best fic of sakura and syaoran that I have read and believe me i have read a lot. Please continue and finish it soon, and trust me I am not only saying this, i usually donīt review fics but this one is great!, please continue |
Reviewed By: Camilla On: August 14, 2002 00:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you so much for writing more. But you must Continue. I LOVED IT! I liked all the confusion Syaoran is going through, I love it. And when is he going to find out? I must know! I must! That's why you have to continue to write more. SO *Takes a deep breath* PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.......*Takes deep breaths* with a... cherry...on top! |
Reviewed By: Kisai On: August 09, 2002 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, i just hope you finish up writing the rest of the fanfic! i just finished the 9th chapter and im basically in awe.. lol i LOVED IT!!! SOOOO.. PPLLEEEAASSEEE finish the rest.. ^_^;; Well until you do ill be making regular check-ups to see how it goes and to see if you've finished... k k ima go now byyyee
Kisai |
Reviewed By: Xtreme Nuisance [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok. I'm serious. I did get sick. ;.; allegies... I think... Ok. It's the 'a) sick or b) die' person. PLEASE WRITE MORE! ::ahem:: Now for a better review than last time:
I think this is a fantastic story. It is the best out there. I didn't know that it was possible for a story THIS GOOD to be on any site. OMG, it seems like I'm sucking up, but I'm not, I'm serious. You see, this is a special review where as I'm not gonna put multiple spaces between every word. Ok. That's not the point. I wsa just going to say that you need to keep writing because you are an AWESOME author (so much for sounding sophisticated...). WRITE MORE AND I WILL FOREVER BE IN YOUR DEBT. ::ahem:: |
Reviewed By: AnimeGamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heya! Still watching Marmalade Boy? =P
Anyway, please continue this story! This is a great story, and im glad that it's a featured story on mediaminer right now. I never really heard of the Thousand Furs story...but im sure that your version is going to be great anyway. |
Reviewed By: KawaiiKaren [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you all 10s,not because I'm just saying that, but you deserve the ratings! I usually don't review fanfics here at mediaminer.org...unless they're extremely good like yours! Now I'm not just here to say 'This is GREAT' or 'MORE MORE MORE!', even though that's how I feel, but out of all the fanfiction I read so far, this seems to be high on my favorite list of alll, even though I never got to put you or this fanfic on the list. Okay, so you have a few words repeated quite often but that's okay. I'm sure everyone does that. But this fanfic is close to being THE perfect fanfic. I mean, I've read some GREAT fanfics before, ones as great as this, but still they never got as much as 4 reviews. And the front page to this fanfic is flooded half way with reviews! Consider yourself very happy with those(looks at the reviews you have)65 reviews and this one being 66! I have only (cries) ONE STINKING REVIEW! All because I chose to write a SONIC fanfic, a series that doesn't have too many fanfics or too many reader/ writers.
You are very lucky to be the author who wrote this story and I think I'm getting my point carried well enough across. I like to write long comments, well longer than the average comment, to fan artists who actually are worth sending a long review. And apparently...^_^ So are you. I'm not hyper like most people out there like to pretend and sadly attempt to be and also,which really annoys me, is the overuse of japanese words in english sentences like a certain K word in my username, well my friends really ARE hyper but they're NOT pretending, and I'm not going to pretend to be anything like the million people are there that do. Well I'll stop boring you now with really long two paragraphed review. Bye! :) |
Reviewed By: Angel mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your fic is really good, and i can't wait to find out what happens next...
Please continue.
I've never heard of this story, but i think your idea is great and i enjoyed reading it.
I hope you put the next chapter up soon |
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