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Reviewed By: Miheran On: November 30, 2007 03:55 CST
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Damn, i hate cliff-hangers. they always make me want to keep lokking each day. great story, great kiss scene and sorry you have to sit thou another one of my terrible reviews (considering this is only my 3rd.... i think)
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Title: YES!!!
Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:26 CST
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You finally updated!!! Thank you! I like this chapter.It has a spark in it! The kissing scene was GREAT! Kudos!
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That is not fair. Simply not fair! Arg! How could you draw us to such an end and then leave it like that?!?! It's immoral and inhuman! GAH!!! But I love you anyway. And don't worry, the kissing scene was quite amazing. You captured the tenderness and 'out-of-the-blue' quality of the action very well. It was sweet yet still sizzling at the end. Sigh. But still... you left it like that. I shake my head at you. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (Oh, and have some confidence! You're a wonderful writer! ;D )
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Reviewed By: FriedDeer On: November 26, 2007 15:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheee, new chapter:D You really manage to capture the reader! Fantastic work, and the kissing scene was really good too. ...just so you know, this is the first time ever I reviewed a fanfic twice^_~ Keep on the good work.
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Reviewed By: akirk85029 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 17:28 CST
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This story was really good. Can't wait for the next chapter!!:)
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Reviewed By: Miheran On: November 15, 2007 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great storie and i can't wait to see when they relise they are engaged to each other
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Title: Smiley!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 18:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was absolutely perfect. Anyone reading this wonderful story can just really feel the pain and anguish felt by Ichigo and Rukia as both their fates begin to come to a close. ...If that makes any sense. Basically, I love this story, it started out cute and funny and has really bridged the gap with heart-felt emotions and dialogue. I can't wait for the next chapter. Also, this story is getting pretty tense, I mean honestly! When will they find out each other's identities? Arg! It's almost too much! But I still can't wait! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TheSeventhPeregrine [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I have read your fanfic (Mistaken Identity) and it was fun to read! I am not a fan of Bleach fanfics (it's not that I don't like them; somehow I want to preserve my idea of Bleach as original as possible) but after reading yours, WHAM! I just have to send you a message/review for your effort. Your story/fanfic really keeps me on my toes (I read your fanfic in one sitting! I couldn't keep my eyes off the page for a sec!). It is my highest praise to any fanfic writer to say that your creation is one of my reasons in continuing to visit mediaminer.org for more! I do hope you update soon. I really can't wait for Rukia's engagement party and how Ichido would react to it. Please!! *puppy eyes* There are some typos in the text (though I assumed those were purely accidental.. A writer's burden, especially if your mind wanders so far away and got so hooked on the story that your fingers worked 100x to catch up with it.. right? =D) I hope you also add me as your friend here. You're officially one of my favorite authors here! And my first too! har har I am just starting here in the miner. Keep up the good work! God Bless always! PS. Are you a Filipino? You seem familiar with street foods such as kikiam/squidballs..? =D
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Title: Go go go!
Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I can't wait for the party!
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Title: holy crap!!!
Reviewed By: crimsoneli On: October 30, 2007 10:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a great fanfiction i REALLY want you to write the next chapter like right now!!! i NEED to know what happens when they see each other at the party.......C'mon!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 00:38 CDT
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...uh...nice story you got there.
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Reviewed By: FriedDeer On: October 26, 2007 14:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this alternative universe setting you've and you are really keeping the characters in character in the same time. And I'm already looking forward to the party AND the moment where they realize who their betrothed is ^_^ Splendid work! Thank you so much for uploading your work.
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Title: OMG!!!!!
Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 06:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! I almost cry reading this chap!This chap is really really REALLY sweet!I love it!Keep going!
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Reviewed By: julywolf On: October 07, 2007 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleaes keep going ill cry if you stop there keep going please
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Title: Yes!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2007 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEAL!!! This chapter was so sweet, I loved how Ichigo was so determined to hurt the person who made Rukia cry and the part where they planned to almost run away!!! Priceless! Oh, and the ending... sniffles... both are betrothed but they don't know it's to each other (it is to each other right? :) ) you need to write more! It's addictive!!!
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