| "Mistaken Identity" Reviews/Comments [ 48 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 05:36 CST
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don't worry about it coming out this late because alot of people have been spending since a bit before X-mas and some are still taking there break, oh yeah i finally found out why my internet kept cutting out and fixed it yay, brillent chap and can't wait to see Rukia's reaction seeing Ichigo on her balcony
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Title: WOW!!!
Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I..I..I...can't even describe it! It's..it's just WONDERFUL!!! Don't stop there go go go!!!
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: kiteEatingTree [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 18:48 CST
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very very nice! loveit!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 21:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for leaving us another cliff hanger! At least this time it wasn't as bad as the other one. Good chapter. It's a good thing Byakuya didn't do more damage to our Ichi. Nothing wrong with fluff between Ichi and Ruki! Fluff is more than welcome there! Update soon, hopefully sooner than the last chapter ;)
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Title: Yowza!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another steamy IchiRuki kiss, not to mention there was BYAKUYA, which was freaking AMAZING!!! I do love Byakuya... sigh. My god you've kept us waiting long enough. Do not deprive your fans of such a story when we are clearly begging for more! ;) Anyway, great chapter, I can't wait until Rukia and Ichigo finally figure everything out. Ah... and, well, I'm expecting another awesome scene with Byakuya, Ichigo, and Rukia--no doubt you'll make it exceedingly entertaining, as always. I can't wait for the next chapter. I know this one took about a month so let's make a deal... how about... update within the next 24 hours? Please? >.< Yay for you!
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Reviewed By: Disturbed leprachaun On: January 05, 2008 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your spelling and stuff could use some work, but the story itself is fantastic! You haven't updated in a while but I really hope you finish it! Your a GREAT writer!
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: December 19, 2007 02:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last time I went on your story, there were only 2 chapters. Now there are a heap more xD Now I shall be checking reguarly and eagerly for your next update ^^b
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Reviewed By: Really ticked off On: December 19, 2007 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Geez. Did you have to stop there? Right there?? *eyebrow twitches* I want more!! I need to know what happens. Please update soon. Onegai shimasu
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Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait till Ichigo finds out who the princess really is!!! Awesome chap,can't wait for the next chap! ~~hoping you will update faster~~
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Reviewed By: Miheran On: December 06, 2007 20:35 CST
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trust Ichigo to stuff up when things are going good for him. would have reviewed days ago but my internet decided that it would stop working on me agian and tried evrything bar throwing throwing the modem out the window but anyway, good chap and can't wait for the next.
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Title: Stares at computer...
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HOW COULD YOOOOOUUUUUUU!!!???!!!???!!!??? RIGHT WHEN SHE TOOK OFF HER MASK!!! *Sobbing continuously* My god, how do you expect us to wait after a chapter like that? It's not possible! *Pouting angrily at computer* Anyway, getting on with what a good reviewer should do, I need to point out other things I really liked: I was very excited to see how Byakuya reacted to the entire situation of Ichigo dancing and eye-groping Rukia. I really enjoyed how you portrayed his psychological struggle while keeping his outward composure as icy as he is (but I still love him C: ) I'm also waiting to see what Renji will do so he can win Rukia's hand--even though she clearly belongs with Ichigo (we need to send telopathic waves to Tite Kubo so he can get them together already). All in all, this was a fantastic chapter and if I may say your writing has improved tremendously, not only your grammar but also your character development and background descriptions. Your story is sweet and tender and still manages to have great cliff hangers as well as an interesting plot. Yay for you!
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Reviewed By: anhimals [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY he knows who she is! I was wondering when you will write it! Now I am excited from the next chapter. Rukia's reaction will probably be like Ichigo! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Miheran On: November 30, 2007 03:55 CST
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Damn, i hate cliff-hangers. they always make me want to keep lokking each day. great story, great kiss scene and sorry you have to sit thou another one of my terrible reviews (considering this is only my 3rd.... i think)
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Title: YES!!!
Reviewed By: Diamond42 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:26 CST
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You finally updated!!! Thank you! I like this chapter.It has a spark in it! The kissing scene was GREAT! Kudos!
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Title: GASP!!!
Reviewed By: Tituba [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That is not fair. Simply not fair! Arg! How could you draw us to such an end and then leave it like that?!?! It's immoral and inhuman! GAH!!! But I love you anyway. And don't worry, the kissing scene was quite amazing. You captured the tenderness and 'out-of-the-blue' quality of the action very well. It was sweet yet still sizzling at the end. Sigh. But still... you left it like that. I shake my head at you. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! (Oh, and have some confidence! You're a wonderful writer! ;D )
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