| "Casual Friends" Reviews/Comments [ 46 ] |
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Reviewed By: darklori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hawt damn! That was like, wow! I have no words, really. You're right, it is lemony. And it's freakin' hard dishing out lemons. I'm still working up the courage to make one. You must have spent countless hours and probably had sleepless nights thinking this up. And usually, although I love lemons (cause I believe this'll probably be the only way we get to see IchiRuki mush and action), I don't really like highly charged sexual fics, most often than not, it comes off as smut. But Casual Friends really isn't... it's so balanced between funny and sexy, i just absolutely loved it.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe and so it ends! I must say another great fic that you've written and I enjoyed it greatly! Was a fun read and great as I got into the prescriptive of the characters and a look into their thoughts about their relationship with one another. Very well done! Oh and the rating is for the last chapter which I think was another one of your greatest written! Thanks for the fic, I really loved it!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 20:07 CDT
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HOLY MOLY NOW THAT WAS SOME HOT HOT HOT SMUT!!! O___O I must say you really have a talent for these things. The raw emotions and passion was simply incredible and well written. I read this chapter twice because it was just that good! Really awesome fic with good plot (though it was more like character development) and smexy! Can't wait to read the epilogue.
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
XDDD! I really like how you are able to put a comedic touch to the fic. It's really quite funny and enjoyable. It makes me laugh because I can perfectly imagine them feeling and acting like that. Now you left me at a cliff hanger! Gah, must be 'heat of the moment' thing that Ichigo did. Look forward to the next chapter! =)
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 17:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFL! That was actually quite funny. I couldn't help control my laughter and actually chuckled a few times. Very good job! I'm getting a real kick out of reading this fic. The different prespectives are awesome! =D
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kukukukuku another great chapter! I'm really liking this different perspective writing. Being able to feel the characters thoughts and emotions is a lot different then dialogue. Though we have yet to have any real interaction between the two, this so far makes it quite broad and more indepth with the characters. Really awesome!
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Reviewed By: OmniPotent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 15:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehehe this looks to be quite an interesting ficlet! And also in store for some sexual tension! Oh ho now that's going to be fun~! I like the different perspectives from the two respective characters. It's like going to their minds and being able to listen to their thoughts and emotions. So far so good. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Zapenbits [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 19:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I don't think that I'll be able to close my mouth for the next week. That was like, "O__O and =OOO ALL at the same time." Well, I DID skim past some parts..but, whatever. Anyway, you keep Ichigo and Rukia in character sooo much that I can soooo picture them doing everything that you're saying! WONDERFUL JOB. Oh! And I wanted to ask..but you don't have to do it, AT ALL. I just wanted to suggest maybe another type of "Murder My Heart" like a Law and Order - Bleach..or maybe even a sequel? You don't have to! Not at all! I just wanted to suggest that. ^__^ Thanks sooo much for this story! Keep on writing!!!!=]]
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Reviewed By: Lady Rini [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2008 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story but what about Rukia's brother and Ichigo's family how are they going to find out.
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Reviewed By: yuwa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 23:58 CST
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well...uh...i think you couldve just ended it on chpter6 but well thats your prerogative...anyway its a nice story. and hot. its both nice and hot. ^-^v wait do i smell cheese. nah! just my imagination.
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 06:26 CST
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Absolutely wonderful!! What was so great about this piece and particually this chapter is that they both were thinking the same things about each other!!! I love the juciy, well described details in the pervious chapter also... I had to walk away from the computer a few times to cool off! But well done... and I can't wait to read more from you!!!
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Title: Chapter six
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 06:18 CST
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I was going to leave just one review... but something I read threw me... Ichigo's NOT circumcised???? @_@
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Title: Ah!!
Reviewed By: Nowshin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 11:05 CST
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Yayayayayay Perfect ending. :D Sorry for not reviewing before. I have been busy with my studies. >_<
Now...*death hug* THANK YOU FOR FINISHING THIS AWESOME STORY!!! YEAH! The epilogue was great, and the "confession" part was wicked cool!! I choked with laughter when I read the part when Rukia was blowing Ichigo while Isshin was talking to him. XD BTW, Just an idea, but you can always write sequel oneshots for this. For example, Isshin's thoughts about this whole ordeal. He may look like an idiot, but I bet he MUST have noticed what his son has really been up to!!! ;)
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Title: You're Amazing
Reviewed By: ritsukaisnotloveless [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is amazing! I'm addicted to it like an addict is addicted to crack >_<
Srsly, though, I printed out all the chapters > But don't worry, if anyone asks me about them, i always give the author complete credit! And reccomend it to them as well ;] GREAT JOB! I LOVE THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: intercostalspace [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a great way to end the fanfic! :)
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