| "His Pain, Her Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Alaskan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started to read this and all I have to say is WOW! Yu capture the emotions of the chacters (especially Inuyasha) so well! I'm quite pleased that Inuyasha doesn't call her a bitch in this story because in the anime or manga he doesn't. Please update soon! Great cliffy too.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 00:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
quite sad what's happening between them... interesting story though... maybe they just need some time apart... Inuyasha in the Feudal era and Kagome in the future for a while... just a suggestion... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 06:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T yup im dieing here T-T from reading a chapter that was cute to this upsetting... its killing T-T please dont be long....
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Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
So much pain. You capture well the pain of grief.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
T-T heart breaking..... BUT you CANT lave it like that T-T PLEASE write more T-T
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Title: write more
Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more plz i need to no wats going to happen so im adding this story to favs
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