| "The Nature Of The Beast" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: crimssonmoon On: June 27, 2011 12:15 EDT
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well.This is the first time I read bestiality and now I know that I'm not that jaded to like it lol Otherwise I must say you are an incredible writer. Your grammar and descriptions are awesome. The only issue I have (aside the animal sex) is Kagome. You tried to save her face but she just came down as stupid and weak. Not to mention a liar. She was pathetic. |
Title: more Chapters?
Reviewed By: Gdemonpet [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2008 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really love the story so far :D Really hope there's going to be another chapter :D
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 02:35 EST
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I feel bad for Kagome....Yoko is just no fare......hehe.....that had to be weird for her gosh it was weird to me and I was just reading it ......which by my stander says that you wrote the well....I mean realy if it wasn't writen well I don't know if it would have freaked me out as much.....but personaly it feels kinda unfinished ya know......its just a sence I get from the ending ....o-well I guess.....sigh.....................good fic.................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: greentreefroggy On: July 08, 2007 04:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very good. It was well written and origianl. Will you be going on with it or no? In any case I liked it.
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 23:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! It's only a one-shot fic! You also leave it at a partial cliffhanger!! Please make it into a story!?! It's very well written! PLEASE???
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Reviewed By: youkos girl (not logged in) On: June 28, 2007 22:08 EDT
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omg you should make tis into a story the plot was so original loved it xD you should really consider making it into a story! i enjoyed the lemons very good xD it was so well written. but if you do decide to make it into a story you should have kagome meet kurama at the hospital or something and then youko would remember her xD what a trear that would be xD i realy really hope that you decide you turn it into a story. i've said that so many times you probably want to shoot me xD.
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: June 28, 2007 17:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and actually well written which was a pleasent surprise. Probably most of all I was impressed with your apparent understanding of some of the different types of kitsune. Most specifically you mentioned the celestial and the spirit I believe. Everyone of course knows that Youko is a spirit kitsune, but I'm impressed that you have knowledge of some of the traditions of the celestial kitsune as well. I think you captured Youko's true spirit kitsune personality as I understand it. Looking at him from that viewpoint, I would say that his pervesness and his attitudes as well as his actions were almost predictable LOL. He set up a continuing virtual feast for himself of emotions on so many levels from Kagome as well as Inu and the others. LOL, I doubt he will ever be hungry again. Anyway, I've gone on long enough. I enjoyed the story and if you ever decide to continue it I'll be happy to see where you take it.
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 10:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is makeing me secretly hate youko but just this once i mean what a creep he could at least talk to her in stead of trying to get into her pants uh well skirt and he could have let her come back home sigh i have a few more qustions were is kikyo is naraku going to be in this story what about the rest of the yu yu gang mainly meaning kurama and is kagome going to be with child will the others make it in time before he takes her again how will inuyasha react if kagome comes with child will he abandon her and i have pleanty more qustions that could probaly be anwserd by another chapter so im going to hold off on them for now please up date soon knjj727
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Reviewed By: Mrs. Kurama On: June 28, 2007 07:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz consider from making this one-shot into a story! It was awesome...and mu caliente...i think that's how you spell it lol. ^^ i enjoyed it verymuch!...I wouldnt really mind being F**cked by a fox...but that would be so strange...but still awesome...i think lol plz reconsider and make this a story it was tha bomb!!!!
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Reviewed By: Roses On: June 28, 2007 03:42 EDT
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Oh, wonderful! I do hope you will consider making this into more than a one shot.
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Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 21:38 EDT
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Wow, that was quite the lemony one-shot! Btw, I hope u write a sequel, especially if she meets Kurama!
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a fantastic one-shot, but I think it would be alot better if it was turned into a story, I wish you would think about it. Just keep up the job well done and I can't wait to read more of your future stories.
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Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: June 27, 2007 11:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm curious to know if this is going to be a one shot or if you're going to take it somewhere else. there are a few loose ends that hadn't been tied up like the rift between Kagome and Inuyasha,if Kagome is pregnant or not, and personally I would have liked to read more with Youko in his human form. Either way it's a very good story. Yours truly, anonomous angel
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Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 06:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a One-Shot?! -- Awwww... *pout.* I enjoyed this thoroughly.
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Reviewed By: CB On: June 27, 2007 05:06 EDT
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You forgot to add Voyeurism. Although I'm curious to know what would happen if Kagome did eventually make it back to the future and ran into Kurama. Looking forward to your future stories.
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