| "A Place of Their Own" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2007 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter update... like it so far... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 12:31 CDT
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interesting story... so not everything is as it seems when Kagome went to live with her father... wonder who else will she meet... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 11:59 CDT
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i like the updated chapter im happy that your story is getting longer :)) well keep up the really good work and i can't wait till the next chapters :))
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far! make the chapters a little bit longer and ill check up on the story later!DON'T FORGET TO UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 16:02 CDT
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i like it and i think you should make your chapters a little longer though otherwise love your work :))
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 20:38 CDT
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good chapter update... who was that person in the window?... interesting... anyway update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 01:00 CDT
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really nice... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: papioma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 07:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: papioma [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 07:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this story hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:35 CDT
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great chapter update... really cute... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my only complaint...it's little short.... otherwise great!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 02:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good starting point.... Soo.... Any "rolling in the hay?" lol.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 01:04 CDT
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interesting story... looking forward to the upcoming chapters... hope you will update soon... please and thank you!
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Title: hmm
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm, i'll have to keep an eye out on this fic, looks good, sounds good, cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: June 28, 2007 13:09 CDT
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Not a bad start. Does make me want to read more. One question though. If Kagome's dad is Japanese why is he from Ireland? I am assuming he's Japanese from his name. I'm not sure, but I think Koharu is a female name.
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