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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like it! It really makes you sad for little Gaara. It's easy to read also since you have pretty good grammer. That's always a plus with me.
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Reviewed By: kitsune hinata On: October 30, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work and you'll do great but plz give us readers a longer chapter next time plz.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 05:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, it's a little different, and rather well done fic. Your writing style is pretty good, and I'd like to read a lot more of it. Please update soon, ja ne
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great beginning to this fic! I can't wait to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
INteresing so far...... I really want to know what will happen next. Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 10:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
OoooooooOOOOOoooooo! Poor little Gaara! I always felt bad for him. No one ever showed him any kindness. I know Naruto would have ended up similar to him if Iruka hadn't showed Naruto that he believed in him. It truely is amazing how one act changes an entire life. Anyways, I love your story and I hope you update soon. I want to see how Naruto reacts to Gaara when they're little. And I want to see how Shikaku and Kuyubi react to eachother. Maybe how they're demons react to eachother will either help or hinder their ability to be friends? Who knows? Update soon and I'll find out. ^_^
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 21:10 CDT
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Great job!!!! (Standing up applauding) I love the story and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!!! Poor gaara. Here's a cookie!!!
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