| "Two of a Kind" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! Gaara can finally play the games he always saw kids playing! Gaara's got happiness! w00t. At least two updates before Christmas? That's a lot!! Tankies!! ^_^ Oh, and my favorite line from this chapter was: "We can catch up later but for now, fuck me." MUCH LOVE!!
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Reviewed By: Lunarwolfdemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 01:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh why is there only 3 chapters so far,I want to read more on what happens between them.Please update it's been some time since I've found a good story and want to be able to read this one to the end.
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW! I swear I'm going to die from fangirlish excitement >D If you read in the papers tomorrow, "Psychotic Anime Freak Dies from Overexposure to Cuteness" then you'll know it was me ^_^. Gaara finally found a friend! Even if Gaara and Naruto aren't the main couple, I'M SO FRIGGIN HAPPY! Both Gaara and Naruto deserve a person to have--in friendship or love. Please write more soon, I love it so far!
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 19:24 CST
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Kawaii ending! I just love how you had Naruto and Gaara give to conversation for Kyubi and Shukaku. You make me want to just hug those to boys to death! I find Kyubi's appearence ironic. (because MILD SPOILER-Naruto's real mom had red hair) I'm looking forward to the next update! Don't worry to much about to spelling thing either cause I know I can't spell worth a dime.
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Reviewed By: jordan. On: November 11, 2007 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very good story, please keep writing.
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Reviewed By: ichiwings [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 20:33 CST
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I love this story so far. I love the plot and I can't wait to see what happens next between the four of them. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 12:08 CST
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This was Great! I can't wait to find out what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:23 CST
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Another good chapter. I would really like to read what you have planned for this story. You have a great start and it makes me want to read more. Just to let you know, I believe that Gaara's name is spelled with 3 "A"s and 1 "R". Also I think Naruto gets his jumpsuit when he's older than 7 but I'm not sure so I'll leave that alone. It's your story and I am enjoying it. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Nekogirl3 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I like it! It really makes you sad for little Gaara. It's easy to read also since you have pretty good grammer. That's always a plus with me.
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Reviewed By: kitsune hinata On: October 30, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work and you'll do great but plz give us readers a longer chapter next time plz.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 05:58 CDT
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Hmmm, it's a little different, and rather well done fic. Your writing style is pretty good, and I'd like to read a lot more of it. Please update soon, ja ne
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Title: Great!
Reviewed By: Starr Stealer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great beginning to this fic! I can't wait to read more of it.
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Reviewed By: Destiny Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 12:03 CDT
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INteresing so far...... I really want to know what will happen next. Please Update Soon!
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 10:10 CDT
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OoooooooOOOOOoooooo! Poor little Gaara! I always felt bad for him. No one ever showed him any kindness. I know Naruto would have ended up similar to him if Iruka hadn't showed Naruto that he believed in him. It truely is amazing how one act changes an entire life. Anyways, I love your story and I hope you update soon. I want to see how Naruto reacts to Gaara when they're little. And I want to see how Shikaku and Kuyubi react to eachother. Maybe how they're demons react to eachother will either help or hinder their ability to be friends? Who knows? Update soon and I'll find out. ^_^
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Reviewed By: itachi-sama15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 21:10 CDT
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Great job!!!! (Standing up applauding) I love the story and can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!!!! Poor gaara. Here's a cookie!!!
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