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Title: I'll die soon
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't deal with this anymore! Jou's stupidity! it's just annoying! Your fan fic is absolutely fantastic and amazing! but Jou is such an idiot...OMG can yo switch to a more intellegent POV? please? Kaiba maybe? Jou's thinking is just too elementary. OMG. I'm gonna go nuts, if he keeps acting like a complete moron! Isn't there an intellegent thought somewhere? I am NOT saying tha author isn't intelligent, because the fan fiction is absolutely great!
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Reviewed By: DeathIsAMidnightRunner On: October 22, 2007 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just... wow. I can not find words to describe it properly. I do not give praise easily, but I really love this. There has only been one other time I was this engrossed in a story. I can really feel the emotions and even your OCs are well put together. (I want to kill Saki with my bare hands but... yeah.) I hope someday that my stories can reach this level. I am eagerly awaiting your update! The suspense is killing me as well!
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Reviewed By: Anon. On: September 09, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just read the whole story. Wow, I love your portrayal of the characters. They have so much going on in their lives but still find moments to have fun in. I look forward to future chapters. And yes, the suspense kills me also.
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Title: Change
Reviewed By: dresslikeinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 04:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know, I was never really one for the Jou/Seto pairing but this was very good and very nicely written. At this point, I guess I'll add another pairing to my list of favorites. ^-^
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Reviewed By: XxXToraXxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 22:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this was so great. I was literally engulfed in this story. Its amazing, and I really hope for you to continue writing it. I love how it varies and how Seto is so in character but at the same time TOTALLY out of character. Its awesome how youve done that. I love the story, please continue. =]
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 00:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this is just wow. The writing is awesome. The way you weave emotions together is superb. I go from laughing really hard one second to blushing or sighing the next. I have never read a uke Seto story but after this I can totally see him in the role. I kinda like how you've given them both strengths and weaknesses. And your OC characters don't over shadow the story line even though they are a major part of it. Every Mary Sue writer should read this to see how you really are supposed to write your own characters in. This is an awesome story, please continue it. *clicks to favorites*
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Reviewed By: Bondage_Bunny_Misa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 16:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTINUE QUICKLY!!! I SOOO want to read more!! AHH! THE SUSPENSE! IT KILLZ!!!*sobs uncontroallby*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 12:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is really good, as well as incredibly tragic. Thank you for sharing it with us (and I'd love an update soon). Please continue to write, and not have 6 month hiatuses. Those tend to suck. Later
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Reviewed By: cinque [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 01:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I´m at chapter 3 now. I think the story progesses a bit fast, but non the less I like the concept very much.
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Reviewed By: Fynrile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 03:01 CDT
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hurry and make the rest I'm cring buckets here!! I hope my bro (Katsuya) kicks that bitch Saki's ass!!! do you do challenges? If so can you write one staring Mokuba & Noah? J/S R/B Y/Atemu and no Anzu!!!
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