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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 18:15 CST
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kay, im being honest.... i actually thought u were gonna make Inuyasha shirtless and only with boxers... AND I AM A KIKYO HATER!!!!!!!!!!! MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! dats a nice name for her 'Kinky-Ho' i luved it, it went with her perfectly!!!!!!!!!!! i hate her!!!!!!!!!! so tell me why u didnt put him in boxers and no shirt?huh? dat would have been perfect... although dey ARE only 8 years old.... ne way nice so far!!! keep it up!!!!!!!
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Title: Lil Babe0206
Reviewed By: Lil Babe0206 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 17:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! i just finished reading chp. 8!!!!!!!! dat was adorable!! but u made Sesshoamru a softy... Ne ways i like dat way he's sweet! but ima more Sessh/Rin kinda person! its just they are sooooooo cute 2geder. Keep it up! oh and i read anoder fic of urs Called Futurama inuyasha style it was awsome!!!!!!!!!! so keep it up and make more fics!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: wonderful
Reviewed By: codac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2007 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i feel you should do a sequal but kip them relativley young it just felt to stop to early to me
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Title: omg.
Reviewed By: Sydney On: October 13, 2007 22:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your a genious. i love your stories. It's amazing how you made Sesshomaru love his little brother. That's the way it's supposed to be. keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2007 18:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.the last chapter....what ever happened to Desprit Inuyasha Wives?awel.great ending by the way.i'll make sure to read The InuYasha-Doo Movie.luck w/ it.Szia. miley
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Reviewed By: Makala On: September 04, 2007 19:14 CDT
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GET THE NEXT CHAPTER UP!!!!!! Pwease. ^^
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!!!
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Reviewed By: inufreak8910 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 11:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i luved this story!!! pleaze write others like this!!!
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Reviewed By: Pim On: August 25, 2007 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe it's over! Waaaaaa! And you have almost 100 reviews. I'm sort of proud right now. If only I could get a little more inspiration for 13 I could finally post it. grrr. okay, enough of my silly ranting. =P I agree with Sesshomaru, blame television for today's youth! haha. I didn't know 3rd graders could fall in love but who knows these days. My favorite part had to be when Inuyasha puckered up for a kiss and Kagome only pecked him on the cheek. That was priceless. And the part where Sango was just like "Of course I'll bear your children..in like 12 years". haha. Great. I'm sad to see it end. -A.J. // xPimx
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Reviewed By: Pim On: August 25, 2007 21:52 CDT
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Family Guy, love that show. haha. Oh man, I really want to go to the park now. I remember those speaker things, I had so much fun with those. Aaah, the good ol' days. haha. XP Nice job. I'll have to read the final chapter and go check out Inuyasha-Doo Movie. XD -A.J.
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Reviewed By: lovehimfroever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! Please tell me if you have a continuation! If you don't, you should start one! That was such a good story and it ended so well! I love it!
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Reviewed By: InuYashacrazy101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 17:58 CDT
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im not gonna say i hate u but U ENDED IT!! *drops to knees and crys* u should've at least made a last chapter about them growing into adults and having kids or somethin!!*sighs* oh well it was ur story.....but now ill never know wut happened to them.....and ill feel sooo sad about never knowing*sigh*.....ok...here we go....end of my review....almost there......headin to the end......here we go.....good-bye......ill miss u......OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE ADD ONE MORE CHAPTER ABOUT THEM GROWING INTO ADULTS AND ABOUT THEIR KIDS OR SOMETHIN!!!ok now that i think i guilted my way onto that idea see ya later -inuyashacrazy101
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Reviewed By: Hester On: August 21, 2007 02:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I mean lewis_hester13@hotmail.com (sometimes i can be such an idiot!!!!!)
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Title: This Story Is SO Adorable!
Reviewed By: Hester On: August 21, 2007 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...if i could rate it more beleive me i would! This is one of the BEST stories i have ever read! It is so cute! Ahh...Young LOVE!!!!! Sorry...sometimes i can get so weird...i love anything romantic! And Inuyasha and Kagome are my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE ROMANCE TOPIC!!!!! Well...I love the story and i can't waite to hear the ending!!!!! You're a very good writer...my own stories aren't exactly good but i try!!!!! Oh...hey...i was wondering if you could add me...if you have an e-mail that is...anyway...heres my e-mail addy: lewis_hester@hotmail.com please add me if you have an msn!!!!! (Oh..and i'm with you on your opinion on Kikyou...I absolutley hate her!!!!! No offfence to the people on her side though!!!!!)
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Reviewed By: *starfall* On: August 20, 2007 22:56 CDT
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AWW!!!!!! that was so cute!!! im so happy for them it's to bad im not crying because i'm happy for them stupid eric broke up with me! oh well great fic!! (you also might not know the eric im talking about)
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