| "Kids Will Be Kids" Reviews/Comments [ 103 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pim On: July 22, 2007 14:16 CDT
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So you're going to be recieving two reviews from me because somehow you updated TWICE without me even realizing it. haha. I suck when it comes to racing games. I just press the little buttons and try to go anywhere but the wall but I usually end up crashing everywhere anyway. haha. My friends have officially banned me from ever playing any racing games ever, as I do not take it seriously enough. hehe. So was Miroku just playing poorly on purpose or did he really just suck at it? The ending was so cute. I did the whole "awwwwww" thing. My sister looked at me funny, it's all good. haha. Nice chapter, now I have to go read the other one, and leave you another review. XD Sincerely, A.J. // xPimx
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 13:31 CDT
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i salute you too!!! i hate kikyou and i love your story!!!!
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Reviewed By: Phoebe On: July 21, 2007 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg! this is suck a cute story i, though, wouldnt be so sure on my grammar rating bc i suck at that! but i love the ages!!! please hurry and write the new chap.! It's all you fault i'm addicted with you cute shippo and baby innuyasha!lol any who keep up the wonderfull work!!!:) Phoebe¢¾¢¾¢¾☻☺
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i loved this chapter i so glad that seeshy believed inu and i also can't wait to se what happens while inu he stays at kagome house
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for reviewing my story.I'm working on chapter six.I don't like Houjo or Kouga.I don't like Kagome's friends.They're annoying.I like your story.Sesshoumaru being nice?wow.It was a sweet brother moment.well, I have to work on ch.6.(right now I'm procrastinating.i need to get back to work.)cant wait for the chapter.bye!
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 08:04 CDT
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Oh, yeah, I liked the part where InuYasha was sleeping on Kagome's bed like a puppy! That was so cute! Katana : )
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Reviewed By: Katana_Kiba_63 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 08:02 CDT
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In case you haven't noticed, I am also a dog demon. I SERIOUSLY don't do the vegetable thing. I'm carnivorus! LOL, just kidding. I think I had to much sugar today, and it's only 9 in the morning! Great fic very well written. PLZ update soon!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 00:03 CDT
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i love the chapter update it made me gasp when i learned that sessy cared!!!! lol well keep up the good work update soon!
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Reviewed By: Pim On: July 20, 2007 00:01 CDT
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A smile a day keeps the grumpies at bay. I LOVE THAT! haha. Quick question, this was just something I was wondering as I finished up the chapter, how long is KWBK going to be, do you know? Ah well, it was good either way. =] Sincerely, A.J. // xPimx
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good chapter.update soon.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!
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Reviewed By: hopelessromantic_16 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this chapter and i;m so glad that kagome got to keep shippo please update soon
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Reviewed By: Pim On: July 17, 2007 02:34 CDT
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The only way I can eat broccoli is if there's cheese on it. haha. I love vegetables, people think it's wierd that I like spinach. XP One vegetable I cannot eat under any circumstances is brussel sprouts, they're just nasty. haha. Naraku was just plain creepy, I thought for a second he was gonna like molest Kagome or something. Jeez. =] Another wonderful chapter. Sincerely, A.J. // xPimx
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Reviewed By: Pim On: July 15, 2007 01:57 CDT
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So, I totally would have loved to have seen Miroku's picture. haha. Great Job! =] Sincerely, A.J. // xPimx
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 12:41 CDT
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loven it UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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