| "GUYS" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: beautifulyreal On: July 04, 2007 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y r the capters not in the right box? Anyway write more i like the story
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Reviewed By: Beautifulyreal On: July 04, 2007 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's agood start try and make the chapters longer but eaiter way i lovr it write more
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Reviewed By: Porcelain_Baby_Doll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 22:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
um...I like the plot...it was very short though...I do think it could be something very good...also...please put some type of indention so we can know when someone is talking or just thinking...it does have potential though
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