| "Forbidden Fruit" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 02:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this first chap! I would probably like to read like him and her meeting and they have to sneek around all the time just to be with on another. you know the forbidden romance thing. and mabey a little citrucy lemon sene wouldn't hurt. WELL HOPE TO READ THE NEXT PART SOON!!! CAN'T WAIT!! YOU'R THE GREATEST!!! THIS FIC IS STARTING OUT REALLY GREAT!
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Reviewed By: leeluu On: July 12, 2007 00:59 CDT
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Oh I would love to see Inuyasha turn her into a vampire, after all they can't get together if she'll eventually end up looking like Kaede. Woah bad mental image.
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Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 00:57 CDT
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tell u what i want to read huh?! well lets see... i want them to get together after a little fight..... but keep having inuyasha visit her at night,thats really nice. peace
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Reviewed By: @____@ On: July 10, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am intrigued. This is great knowing that you are going to continue writing this story ^^
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: July 10, 2007 22:57 CDT
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Woohooo!!!! Yeah! You're continuing! I would love to see Inuyasha approach Kagome asking her out on a date all brazen-like. That is, unless Kagome can detect who a vampire is before they decide to show her their fangs, so to speak.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 20:26 CDT
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Well basically,,, you know Inuyasha and KAgome hooking up, at first she fights him until she can't deny she loves him, he turns his back on his kind and helps her kill vampires or whatever.
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Reviewed By: ezaangel(nsi) On: July 10, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
brilliant,absolutely brilliant, i loved the concept.. Just some ideas...keep it purely inu/kag no other interactions with other characters like miro/sang. Angst is always good as long as its balanced out with "happiness" if you get my drift. anyways heres some of my ideas,there just suggestions you dont have to pay any heed to them if you want. cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 13:51 CDT
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Ooh, glad to see that you're continuing! I'd love to see a scene (would probs have to be the final one, when i think about it) whent e vampires team up on Kags, and Inu steps in to save her! I'm a sucker for fiesty girls who still need to get saved! Hehe. Can't wait for the update, your first chappy was amazing!
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Reviewed By: midnightoil On: July 07, 2007 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was pure brilliance. I do not know where you get your inspiration, but oh boy do you have talent.
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: July 07, 2007 22:15 CDT
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Very nice. Though it doesn't seem like Inuyasha to wimp out of a forbidden relationship. And hey Kagome is already receptive to him, even inher sleep. Let a continuation commence!! Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: atsuyaka On: July 07, 2007 21:30 CDT
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Oh man a relationship between them would be so hot. And I am curious as to why Kagome hates vampires so much.
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful one-shot! I had hoped that it would be more but then again it´s perfect. Thanks for posting it!
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Reviewed By: angelhikariinu On: July 06, 2007 23:28 CDT
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I want more! I just love the potential of a forbidden romance.
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: July 06, 2007 19:20 CDT
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.................This was too good to just be a one-shot. I want more, MORE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: willowfur^-^ On: July 06, 2007 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO!!! Why did you have to make a graet story like this a one-shot?!?! This is to good a story to just leave hanging like that. If you wont make this a multiple chapter story at least write a sequal (a very long one) where Kagome and Inuyasha get togther!! pplllzzzzzzzz!!! Well hope you write a sequal to the story OR you can make it a multiple chapter story. Either one will make me happy!(^__^) JA NE!!!!!!! ~ WILLOWFUR^-^
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