| "Shinidama Choo Choo" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW that was great! You should get bored more often. I LMAO. Amazing what a few soul stealers can do! You are such a terrific writer! Keep up the wonderful work. MORE MORE MORE!!!!
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Title: la623
Reviewed By: la623 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This was great! Hilarious and yet so sweet! :)
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Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kami Kuso! That was crazy! Turtles and orgies and muppets...Oh my! You've also given me an excellent idea...because even with as silly as the whole story was - which was obviously your intention - the bottom line was that it still made a very good point. Somebody DOES need to sit their asses down and get them to pop their own heads from outta there. Maybe I should do something...in a serious fashion...where somebody tells it like it is? *evil plot bunny rubs palms together greedily* Oh, and one more thing... (sorry, couldn't give up doing Columbo pun) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, you have done it again!! Another Brillantly Exquisite and Shining example of your amazing talent! I love this fresh and delightful look into the sex lives of the Shinidamachuu! Great to make them both sexes. Loved so much how you explained the strained looks upon there faces in the Manga and Anime! I got the biggest giggle fit over this tale and I had the image of Peter Falks complete in his Columbo outfit and trademark cigar perched upon Kagome's knee! Loved that name you gave the Grand Poo-bah of soul collectors, Hiromasa... he has become one of my favourites... I can also picture him wearing a tie-dye rainbow shirt and long hair saying peace.. Swoons very happily! And oh my gosh!! Those poor turtles!! What was she trying to do to them.. see how far see could skip them? LMAO!! Love that being bored gave fruit to this beautiful gem! Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Arii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 09:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL Love it! Love it! Love it! You should be bored more often if it's going to result in stories like this. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 08:04 CDT
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I've red this fic three times now. First time I was just laughing 'til I cried. Second time I red I managed to stifle my laughs a little, not much. In fact, not at all. Third time I went down on the floor and couldn't get up again, because I had cramps from laughing. Now, ten minutes later, I can review. I am so testing the mojito recepy you sent: I wanna write stuff like this too!
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Reviewed By: Autumn_the_Reviewer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 04:27 CDT
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Hilarious! Fucking Hilarious. Oh my god, at 5:22 am with out any sleep im laughing so hard my cats are freaking out. hahahahahahahahahah damn what a story. and you spelled the chuu right. It's supposed to be without the hyphen, but someone decided to hyphen it, as well as some variations of Inuyasha's name. But man oh man, im gonna have some weird dreams tonight, of little chuu's having massive orgies in a choo choo line surrounding Inuyasha and Kagome. I swear i will. And the Peter Faulk voce, oh gods. lmfao. Great story, keep up the excellent work! Get bored more often!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
not sure which image caused the most choking, turtles skipping 4-5 times over a pond, or an albino Soulstealer/kermit crossbreed wearing a trench and holding a cigar.. I grew up on columbo.. *brain fry* All in all NOT safe for late night reading if you have close neighbors, they wondered about the laughing *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: lunatickat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2007 02:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mojito + boredom = pure gold. Please continue to be drunk and bored because you write some of the most entertaining one-shots I've ever read.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, but that was good, lol. Love the little 'chue' Peter Falk dude, too. That was cute. And I dont know how you spell that either, but hell, it worked for me! Lol.
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