| "My One True Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Charmander is cool On: May 23, 2009 01:25 CDT
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This is a cute storyline. I only read the first chapter. I had trouble with it not in paragraph format though. Could you re-write in paragraph format?
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Reviewed By: a random reader On: September 20, 2007 16:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Naraku alive or dead? Did he die during the story? If so, it should at least be mentioned. If they left before/during winter & Miroku didn't get punished til after spring, what took them so long?) A little history for Kaori would also be nice. At the moment this is a decent story, but it has potential to be a great story.
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Reviewed By: Tara_019 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 01:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
not a bad story line but it seems to be twisting Inuyasha's character out of shape
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great chapter update... story is coming along fine... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting story... i like it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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