| "The Long Awaited Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 19:02 CST
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btw, i think that some people that send you flames...i wont name names *cough* are ignorant to others' work. if you dont like the pairing then dont read it. that is a fact! (sorry i got that off of his site hehe) my opinion or maybe it could be a fact is that these are called fan fictions. am i right?? so us fans that write our own stories, can match whoever we want.
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Title: inu_miko
Reviewed By: inu_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 18:50 CST
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i was thinking that a few of your chapters were a bit rushed, but then i realized, unlike some reviewers, this is your story. you can make the characters do whatever you want them to do and so far i like what you are doing with them. very few s/k fics have inuyasha evil. but the ones i have read were nice. also, i personally dont care about grammer and all that nonsense...as long as i can read it. i do hope you update your stories, even if i am the only reader.
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Reviewed By: lilblondie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 16:16 CST
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oops sry i forgot 2 put or ended in my love or my mate.
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Reviewed By: lilblondie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the stories the only thing i really didnt like was every time kagome and shessamaru talked it either started in " my love " or "my mate". But overall great job.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2008 15:18 CST
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I read two paragraphs and stopped reading further. In those two paragraphs you rewrite the entire canon. Suddenly Inuyasha doesn't care about Kagome, she doesn't care about him, and Sesshomaru has been lusting for her and her for him......welcome to the club for Cliche and Crappy Sess/Kag Fics. It's a pretty large group of authors who use the same tired, old and outright ridiculous ideas to force those two together. You'll fit right in. Seriously, please, if you're gonna write this pairing, at least try and make it believable, because right now I'm just groaning it's so bad.
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Reviewed By: Rya35 On: December 21, 2007 03:36 CST
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I really like where the fic is going so far but it seems like things are just not working in favour of kagome and sesshomaru. It would be nice to see the couple get a break where things go right, like koga returns with kikyo. If kagome knows that kikyo is alive, then when/if inuyasha comes for her, she could somehow subdue him into listening, and ta-da! Happy ending! I'm excited to find out more about the pups. How far along is kagome into her pregnancy? And you said that miroku and sango could be married withing the week? Can you do a mir/san wedding night lemon scene??? It's really good so far!! Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: Long Awaited Destiny
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm loving your fic. I love how you got Kogua and Ayami together. (I think I spelled her name wrong). I can almost feel sorry for Kikyo. Can't wait for more. Moon Fairy Goddess.
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooooooo!!! How many!!!!
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Reviewed By: CrystalMaiden87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 00:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay im so glad that you updated im looking foward to the next chapters to come.
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Title: kaibafan1
Reviewed By: kaibafan1 (not logged in) On: October 09, 2007 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it's fine the way it is, "to each their own", everyone has their own way of writing their stories. And i think you should continue it the way it is.
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Reviewed By: crystalmaiden On: August 19, 2007 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i really like this story, I dont think you should revise it. But i think it would be nice to have an actual ending to it.
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Reviewed By: little189 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 00:49 CDT
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i like it a lot but it does need more TLC....you rushed the characters into love....but they didnt experience nything that would push them together....something like kagome saving sesshoumaru or the other way around.....and sesshy seems a little bit OOC......i dont think that he would talk that much in the beginning to kags.....maybe have him try to kill her or something.....have fun.....but you do have something in the makings its just a little rough
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 10, 2007 23:18 CDT
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you are going to quickly and the characters are very out of character. Also what do you mean giving herself to him completly your context makes no sence.slow down and add detail it is a great plot it just needs a little TLC
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Reviewed By: InuKiKei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 05:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it could be a lot better if you slowed the story down and added more detail, also the characters are behaving VERY out of character, particularly InuYasha.
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Reviewed By: Porcelain_Baby_Doll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 12:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very very very wonderful...please write more soon!
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