| "Our Lives in the Hurricane Chronicles" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Title: HAHAHAHAAAA-cough-HAAA!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:40 EST
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'Itai, ya dumb bitch...' Yasume muttered. That was HILARIOUS!!! Thank Kami-sama you updated cuz i was ready to have a heart attack! Plz update Sooner!
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Title: oh my god!!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 17:22 EST
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i was read my life as hintata hyuga and i stumbled upon something major! in one of the chapters (i 4got which one) mayu and sasuke went to the ishiraki residence and she was reading her diary!! and it said she was engaged to some boy! hellur??? it's ITACHI!!! so now I know why she's taken! what's sasuke gunna do if mayu ever tells?! oh god....i'm scerd! and i'm too anxious for the next chapter!!
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Title: oh please hurry!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 13:01 EST
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please hurry with the next chapter soon! i'm DYING!!!! i wanna know what's gonna happen between mayu and oro-bastard and naruto!
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Title: oh please hurry!!
Reviewed By: SmilezPeepz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2007 13:01 EST
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please hurry with the next chapter soon! i'm DYING!!!! i wanna know what's gonna happen between mayu and oro-bastard and naruto!
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Title: plz udate!!!!
Reviewed By: kiwi_mist_96 On: November 26, 2007 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude! Yo writin' is pimpin! and also, i wanna know wat'll happen between SasuxMayu! They are such a sweet couple, and i really hope they get back together. oh and is Mayu taken by Itachi-de-hottie. i really think ita-san is awesome, but only in your story. but, anyways, update soon! there is a site i'll give you to find the Naruto manga, ya have ta check it out. www.onemanga.com You'll be able to update soon after you finish reading most of the mange!!!
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Title: shit...
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: November 16, 2007 17:20 EST
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i forgot my fucking password....shit............. anywayz, i REALLY gotta know about Yasmine's past NOW!!!! i think she's related to Mayu!! Hehehehehe! But seriously, plz make a chappy about her past or something!!! update soon before i die!! ^^
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Title: not logged on again...
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: November 14, 2007 17:46 EST
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"...I'm gonna kick your ass...from here to right over there...Yeah, motherfucka!" That was FUNNY!!!!! Mayu is mad krazy! Anywho...plz make a chappy with mayu going to the sand and seeing gaa-chan~! Also, plz write more about sasuXmayu relation ship and her family! i wanna know what's going on! And Did Mayu try to commit suicide with Theresa's PILLS?! gimme the exact 411 on that one!! UPDATE SOON, I ALMOST DIED WAITING...!!
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Reviewed By: DoggaNothlit [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"WHY IS THAT PLACE THE FIRST THING A MAN GRABS?! STOP! TOUCHING! ME!": Mayu/Deidara That's my fav qoute cuase it's funny and true. If a guy were in a womans body that's what he'd do ><
UPDATE! WRITE MORE!
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2007 16:00 EDT
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I love you fan fic
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: October 14, 2007 15:41 EDT
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You know....I love you....... huh yea and if you keep writing I'll like you.....
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Title: hey!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel_8 On: October 12, 2007 20:17 EDT
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it's still me MoonAngel8, just not logged on!! MY fave quote was, "Eat shit and choke!" IT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!!! Ino wuz hilarious!!! And I know what Gaara said to Ino! He said he loves Mayu or at least something related to that!! I got ya now!!
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Title: YAY!!!!!!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOOO!!!!!! When Naru, Ino, and Mayu started yellin at Deidara to get off of Gaara, I wuz rollin!!!!!!That was SOOOO funny!!! Deidara duz look like a male Ino tho.... ANYWAYZ, Plz update soon!! I wanna know what happens bewteen Gaara and Mayu and Sasuke!!! And also Naru and Hina. Why wuz she mad or so they say???
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: September 28, 2007 18:22 EDT
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I Love this!!!!!!!! Plz I hope Mayu and sasuke get together again! I'm your biggest fan........really
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Reviewed By: kwl4kids2 On: September 24, 2007 21:59 EDT
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Your chap was good. PLZ Write more and more and more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it
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Title: oh shit!
Reviewed By: MoonAngel8 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2007 20:25 EDT
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damn!!!! mayu got the stuff!!!! where the heck did she learn chidori from?!? oh my gawd!!!!!! i wish i was mayu!! u gotta update soon dammit!!!!!!!!! skool is just around the friggin corner!! And mayu curses A LOT. she MUST be mad! 'your ass is grass'??? WTF?! What duz that mean?!
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