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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That.......was AWESOME! hehe, i loved it! W00!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I could really see every emotion playing out. Like a movie in my mind.... Keep up the wonderful work and PLEASE update soon! **Hope you're having a nice vacation!
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Reviewed By: Aisuru_315 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 13:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutley love it...I havn't come across a fanfiction this great in some time...please continue
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Reviewed By: sakuralovesinuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 13:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Absolutely awesome!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 12:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute and nice chapter update... liking it so far... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI On: July 18, 2007 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are doing an amazing job! I love the maturity you are showing with the characters! I love that Inuyasha has become more open to Kagome and Kagome has become more tempered towards Inuyasha (meaning her spoiled brat temper tantrums) You I would say have captured what RT is trying to put across to us, that the characters are growing as people. The way you use the words and descriptions to create these beautifully painted images! I feel like I am reading a volume of Inuyasha. I want to say thank you for sharing this with us and letting us your readers review it! Thank you also for being a very well written writer! and the second character was so romantically erotic and funny at the same time. Loved that Kagome was fighting with herself not to giggle at Inuyasha's errr... not so little problem. The way they could act intimately together and of course the ever common interruption by Shippou to ruin the moment. I am hoping she doesn't punish Inuyasha for the embarrassment. And Shippou really needs to learn to butt out. But you have kept him true to character as well.. very clingy.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 06:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
Niiiiiiice. Can't wait to see what you put them through next!
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 05:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was pretty good. up date soon please! I love it how you put the story in a first person view. It really shows how that person is feeling at that exact moment.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 01:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice story... enjoyed reading it... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Qui [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awee this is adorable i love this storyy :] is it also on ff.net?
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Reviewed By: bookworm810 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty good, please continue. I want to see where this leads.
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Reviewed By: dizzydragonz On: July 17, 2007 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the story! Hope there's many more chapters to come. The characters and dialogue felt genuine. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 19:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very nice. Love IY point of view, and the mature outlook. If there is more story, let us have it!
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Title: WONDERFUL
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! That was Terrific, Fantastic. I could really feel the emotions that Inuyasha was feeling. I would love for you to continue I will definately read and review. You are very talented. I love the romance. Please, please, please continue!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I'm not one for reading a P.O.V piece, I liked it, I really did. You kept the dialogue going so it just wasn't one-sided like. If you decide to continue it, I'm there, lol... but its good as it is, too. ;)
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