| "Village of demons" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: My-Only-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 01:05 CDT
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Interesting story. I think you have quite a talent at writing and I'm sure each chapter after these will be great! I just laughed Sesshoumaru's eyebrow twitching after InuYasha called him "fluffy". Keep up the good work ^__~
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 03:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that sesshoumaru asked inuyasha for help & a truce... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: shinimegami82 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I enjoyed your fanfic, I did find it a little hard to read at times since the grammar was off. You placed "there" where there should have been a "their" or a "they're" and also you placed "their" for "there". Another word was "where" and "were" those two words even sound different. I think I saw one time you used "are" for the word "our" and also "your" for "you're" and vise versa. You're spelling wasn't really off from what I could see. I really loved how creative you are, but you should really take that creativity to a better level. Be more descriptive in your scenes, don't worry if it's going to be a lot of pages, as long as it's good description, then people will want to read it. I know that a lot of people like to read stories with descriptions of places and things. You don't have to make things too descriptive, like talking about every grain of wood or anything, just like what objects, colors, feels, sounds, smells, and such are around the characters. Haha, look at me, I'm being lengthy in my review. Anyway, I hope that you can see this as positive criticism and not get mad at me.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... very touching... happy that inuyasha & kagome are together and going strong... and they are preparing for the war coming up... it would be nice to start to end this story... then come up with a new one next... just a suggestion... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Title: MWAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: ThaJenThing On: November 23, 2007 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tis F***ING gooood o.o
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... liked how inuyasha & the gang offered the raven twins to go back with them to their village... seems that inuyasha & the gang are collecting a variety of demons at their village... hopefully it'll be good for the upcoming war... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... hope they find the shards... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... glad that inuyasha & kagome are finally mates - thank you... hope they'll be ready when the evil army comes... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 02:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice update... seems like the village is growing... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 06:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice chapter update... seems like new trouble coming soon... hope the truce stays even after the attacks... inuyasha & kagome should let the village know what will be happening... inuyasha & kagome should mate already... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 12:57 CDT
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your story is shaping nicely. good luck on the muse. mine just went on holiday..*sigh*
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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very interesting story... i like it so far... so glad inuyasha & kagome are together now even though not as mates or in marriage yet... it would be good for them to stick together cause it seems that another evil is coming there way... hope inuyasha & sesshomaru will get along... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*blush* that was really not required to announce my presence, but then again thank you. The update was so sweet!!! I enjoyed it and once again the story was pretty much well written. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Silver Dog of the Snow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 23:41 CDT
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ah!!! this is so kawaii!!! I love this story it is so cute and well written!!! please update soon or I'll die of curiousity!!!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 08:47 CDT
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the character thoughts and feelings were well written.
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