Reviewed By: Kate On: June 20, 2002 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I only read up to the part where we find out that Vegeta is connected to ChiChi. Truthfully, I couldn't read any further. It just doesn't make sense. I could understand Bulma, Trunks, or Goku, maybe even Yamcha, Piccolo or Gohan but ChiChi! Sorry, I can't buy it but on the bright side, I did like your writing style. Good luck with the fic. |
