| "All in Me" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 14:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good chappy, girl! And HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!
I can't wait to see how this story turns out. It's really good and quite funny at times!
Take care & have a great weekend! |
Reviewed By: MistressAlexa [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 00:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sweet, I finally got to read more of this fic. FF has been a mild pain in the ass recently. Anyway, I really love this story. Truly an original piece of work. Oh, and the intimate interactions are very interesting. Nicely done overall. Hope you can update soon.
Happy Birthday!! Albeit a bit belated. |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*dies* |
Reviewed By: Trunks' Saiyajin Princess On: July 08, 2002 12:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mwahahaha poor poor veggie. yea, the shirt just cant be left out. this is comin along good; i wanna c how the baby shower turns out!
*~*Cat*~* |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2002 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Amazing fic, cant wait to read more~_^ |
Reviewed By: Majin Cosmo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe I started this fanfic on fanfiction.net, but I've finally given up on that site, so I'm ecstatic that you decided to post the story here as well. It's very well written, and highly original. Kudos to you for doing such first class work! :) ~ Majin Cosmo |
Reviewed By: Lady Hella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, if mm.org is good for one thing; it's as a backup when our trusty (or not so trusty) ff.net gets all busted up. What is this, the fourth time? God.
Well, this do be a review for you . . . *scowls* God, i hate this site. NO! Wait! That's not the review!
Here's the review: Aw, i was so waiting for the old father/son chat, and i just loved Vegeta's way of reassuring his son. Sweet. And tickling him?! Perfect!
But god. . . how could you put him in the pink shirt again! THE HORROR!! Just when i had disinfected my mind of all traces of that shirt. . .there you go, putting it back in there again. *sighs* But you know i loved it anyway. Update sometime soon. . .because you just know i'll review! And uh, sorry to hear about your bug-bitten legs! :-) |
Reviewed By: kiarene On: June 21, 2002 20:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
bwahahah!! *dies laughing*
*sticky note floats in air*
put me on your mailing list
kiarene@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: kiarene On: June 21, 2002 20:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
bwhahaha!!! great twist! i've always bitched about how guys should know what pregnant women go thru...this is so hilarious!! |
Reviewed By: Erica On: June 21, 2002 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just another great chapter on top of many others. I also really like Halfbreed so far. READ IT PEOPLE!!!!! By the way, Posting the chapters on MediaMiner was a great idea! |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith On: June 21, 2002 11:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't you tell me about mediaminer before?? grin
I've been pining away while FFN did updates... but YAY!!! My favorite authors are here... totally cool...
Oh, the story! wicked grin You know I loved it, or I wouldn't review. The Badman shirt was so funny...as was the tickles! And the "allergies" bit was cute too! Great job!! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 07:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW! this was really weird but oh i love it, hehehe, Vegeta being seen only by Bulma and oh the pink shirt, every great fic has the pink shirt!
keep going woohoo |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: June 20, 2002 14:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
First of all, FFN is stupid.
That being said...
For the moment, Beji uploaded the WRONG CHAPTER for chapter two.Veggie + Chichi = NOPE She, like, changed her mind and re-wrote it, so just ignore it till she gets it all fixed, akay? Yeah, that's what I thought.
Oh, and Beji--quit making me do your dirty work for you. ;-)
BTW, love the fic, as usual. |
Reviewed By: Kate On: June 20, 2002 14:05 CDT
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I only read up to the part where we find out that Vegeta is connected to ChiChi. Truthfully, I couldn't read any further. It just doesn't make sense. I could understand Bulma, Trunks, or Goku, maybe even Yamcha, Piccolo or Gohan but ChiChi! Sorry, I can't buy it but on the bright side, I did like your writing style. Good luck with the fic. |
Reviewed By: Rae George On: June 20, 2002 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter nine! Suh-weet!
That's my new word, have you noticed?
SUH-WEET! |
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