| "The Sickness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You back!!!!! Thank you !!!!! Thank you!!! As always great start...I can't wait until Sesshomaru takes care of Rin's pain....A his mother...she was funny... She had to tell Sesshomaru about the birds and bee ;) ...Can't wait until the next chapter ....Please don't never go away again!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:06 CDT
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wow this great you got them down pack please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:06 CDT
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wow this great you got them down pack please update soonabcg
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 22:40 CDT
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I so want to read more! You have been away for a long time but now I trust you are back for good, right? Warm hug from Brazil, my friend!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 21:44 CDT
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Very good! You nailed the characteristics... but I think theres too much of Rin speaking in the 3rd person... I know that sometimes since Sesshoumaru does it, some people like to make her do it too, but I believe she is capable of speaking properly. I really do believe Sesshoumaru loves Rin, after she dies a second time, before she is able to be revived he is totally broken and realizes a life's worth. I hope you write more chapters!
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