| "The Sickness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I greatly enjoyed this story. I hope that you will find the time to update on your other stories. Looking to read of something of yours really soon.
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Reviewed By: Princess of Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 07:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!!~!!! Your writing is amazing, some of the best I've read in the few years I've read fanfics. I've read all of your Sess/Rin fics and adore you for writing them! Please never stop writing, you have a gift!
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Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 01:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was amazing.
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Title: I'VE MISSED YOU!!!!!
Reviewed By: Jonique918 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!!! I cant believe my favorite fanfiction author is back! I was convinced I would never see your work again after 2 years past since you updated "A House Divided". Not only have you come back but you have brought a very good fanfic with you! I cant wait to read the following chapters. I have been checking at least once a month and finally here you are!! My prayers have been answered!
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Reviewed By: cloverfire19 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is great so far! I love Rin and Sesshy! And both of them thinking they're sick is really cute. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: -xkagomex- [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good story so far! hope you update soon.but i would also like to agree with FayeMegan rin is speaking in 3rd person alot it suits her but you know the saying "to much of a good thing" well its like that we like reading it but get bored if we read it alot. update soon! ^.^
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Reviewed By: Spaz913 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! TheMaven is back!!
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Title: New Fan
Reviewed By: Sci-Jess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 18:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ARE BACK. YYIIIIPPPPEEEEE!!!!!!! I REALLY MISS YOU AND YOUR WRITING. TOO MANY GOOD WRITERS LIKE YOUR SELF ARE DISAPPEARING. BUT, YOU ARE BACK AND I HOPE THAT YOU ARE BACK FOR GOOD. PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY AND YOUR OTHER WORKS REALLY SOON; I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READ YOUR STUFF AGAIN
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Title: WELCOME BACK!
Reviewed By: wickedoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
As soon as I saw "theMaven" I swear my eyes got as big as saucers! So very glad you're back and hope life has been treating you well. Wicked-Oni
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am really liking this. Gotta love Sess having 'the' conversion with his mother, lol. That was precious. Like too, your characterizations, most excellent. Should prove interesting on what happens next, but Update when ya can! ;)
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You back!!!!! Thank you !!!!! Thank you!!! As always great start...I can't wait until Sesshomaru takes care of Rin's pain....A his mother...she was funny... She had to tell Sesshomaru about the birds and bee ;) ...Can't wait until the next chapter ....Please don't never go away again!!!!!!!
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Title: cccccc
Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this great you got them down pack please update soon
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Reviewed By: essie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 23:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow this great you got them down pack please update soonabcg
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Reviewed By: lere [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 22:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I so want to read more! You have been away for a long time but now I trust you are back for good, right? Warm hug from Brazil, my friend!
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Reviewed By: FayeMegan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good! You nailed the characteristics... but I think theres too much of Rin speaking in the 3rd person... I know that sometimes since Sesshoumaru does it, some people like to make her do it too, but I believe she is capable of speaking properly. I really do believe Sesshoumaru loves Rin, after she dies a second time, before she is able to be revived he is totally broken and realizes a life's worth. I hope you write more chapters!
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