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| "I Just Needed To Tell You" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Jeora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 09:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
And because this website has a nasty little habit of cutting off my comments halfway through, I'm adding this one; Like I said.. er, tried to say before, it'd be rather spiffy if you did a small sequel for this one. Prol'ly focusing on Inuyasha explaining everything, and whatnot. Keep up the good work. n_n
| Reviewed By: Jeora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 09:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I believe that you could've put more emotion into the fic.. er.. so to say, to make the reader feel more like what the character is feeling. Other than that, I've only seen this general plot used once or twice, and not even in the same way- You know, the whole Inuyasha waiting five hundred years for her. Anyways, I really enjoyed it, and it was a good start for my morning. I actually checked out the rest of your fanfictions before I reviewed, and read the update of Brave New World. Good job, I like how that story is going.
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